Re: You are very good.myhesitationFebruary 6 2005, 22:18:18 UTC
I could never write like this it would be so forced. I stick with my crappy writing caused inspiration bursts I get every once in awhile. I like your other writing too but it's a bit long for me and my eyes start to swim around in the letters.
its almost like reading from a book of legendary poetry.. considering i read this one after your long one you have left me in awe again.. this poem here shows what happens when you tie everything in.. not sure if you get that but i see soo many poems with dead ends and full potential to be a beautiful peice but its always just left there.. your poem is the perfect example of what a real poem is.. after that being said i have one question who or what is your inspiration id very much like to know.. that poem and those words are truely is beyond amazing and where its coming from can only show to be even more amazing..
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I'd perfer not to let the secret out to everyone. LOL~
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