Vanity's Insanity

Feb 06, 2005 14:36

I die to lie with my lovley young lady ( Read more... )

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You are very good. myhesitation February 6 2005, 21:22:04 UTC
Finally something worth reading.

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Re: You are very good. canorous_eggo February 6 2005, 22:13:36 UTC
A-thank you! I don't see why other people are so incapable of beauty writing. They just aren't trying hard enough.

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Re: You are very good. myhesitation February 6 2005, 22:18:18 UTC
I could never write like this it would be so forced. I stick with my crappy writing caused inspiration bursts I get every once in awhile. I like your other writing too but it's a bit long for me and my eyes start to swim around in the letters.

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Re: You are very good. canorous_eggo February 6 2005, 22:19:53 UTC
LMAO, thats what happens to me with text books.

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_lostnconfuzed_ February 6 2005, 23:01:24 UTC
wow... wish i could write as beutifully as that

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wish i could spell too _lostnconfuzed_ February 6 2005, 23:01:48 UTC
*beautiful

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*tear* _unsaid_ February 7 2005, 03:30:14 UTC
its almost like reading from a book of legendary poetry.. considering i read this one after your long one you have left me in awe again.. this poem here shows what happens when you tie everything in.. not sure if you get that but i see soo many poems with dead ends and full potential to be a beautiful peice but its always just left there.. your poem is the perfect example of what a real poem is.. after that being said i have one question who or what is your inspiration id very much like to know.. that poem and those words are truely is beyond amazing and where its coming from can only show to be even more amazing..

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Re: *tear* canorous_eggo February 8 2005, 03:44:41 UTC
We had this discussion.

I'd perfer not to let the secret out to everyone. LOL~

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