As I Do.

Feb 06, 2005 14:39

I had some words with a friend. A friend that I did not know that I had. She was an elder of the heart. She knew of all things concerning true inalienable love. But there was something bothering my friend. She was saddened becasue she had claimed to have lost her only love, due to things that were beyond me and vague to me. And she knew this... But ( Read more... )

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princepwnage February 6 2005, 21:23:04 UTC
can you summarize that? maybe into like 3 sentances?

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canorous_eggo February 6 2005, 22:39:59 UTC
No sir.
Quit being a lazy asshole and read it.

Lol!

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undrgrndthts February 6 2005, 21:47:56 UTC
Hun, I want to read something new! Ive read this 8 times!<3

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canorous_eggo February 6 2005, 22:12:05 UTC
I'm in the middle of an epic! You can't rush it!
Im just posting the good ones because I haven't already.

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hurry hurry.. _unsaid_ February 7 2005, 03:22:45 UTC
well the comments from myspace barely sum this peices greatness although there is nothing more that i can say to do it justice but i would like to say that i am in pure aww and need to read it again.. the way you use your word choice and simple color names make out these beautiful pictures that come and then vanish is quite an exquisite way of writing that i havent seen anywhere else and it is highly appreciated by me and i am on edge waiting for another..

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_________apathy February 7 2005, 05:16:17 UTC
YOU are having my kids.

and writing them awesome bedtime stories!

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confused_booty February 8 2005, 04:02:16 UTC
wow that was amazing you're so talented. it was such a vivid picture in my head and it was so beautifully painted out.

I'll remember reading this on here when your poems are published<3

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