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The World is Getting Louder.
Apr 19, 2008 13:08
Do I have to be loud (
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Spoken as a free-style hiphop
sir_slapahoe
April 21 2008, 02:39:36 UTC
Got my book and I'm a-thumpin'
Start debates, have people jumpin'
Kickin' down your bedroom door
With funky words that you abhor
I'll lay that knowledge on your ear
So don't trip over my veneer
This ain't the face of ignorance
you just don't know my circumstance
I gots to spit my litany
Its all I got thats guidin' me
So judge us not when we commence
our spoken, written confluence
'Cause we're the bright, the erudite
With sentence structure recondite
Believe that we'll put up a fight
For our free speech, its our damn RIGHT.
BOOM.
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Re: Spoken as a free-style hiphop
sir_slapahoe
July 16 2008, 07:16:08 UTC
mind not some poor bot's sore pride,
nor words pried from over-thumped thesauri.
thankfully, the right to voice his mission
gives also our freedom not to listen.
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sir_slapahoe
April 21 2008, 02:43:42 UTC
PS. Your scansion blows. Revise.
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Comments 3
Start debates, have people jumpin'
Kickin' down your bedroom door
With funky words that you abhor
I'll lay that knowledge on your ear
So don't trip over my veneer
This ain't the face of ignorance
you just don't know my circumstance
I gots to spit my litany
Its all I got thats guidin' me
So judge us not when we commence
our spoken, written confluence
'Cause we're the bright, the erudite
With sentence structure recondite
Believe that we'll put up a fight
For our free speech, its our damn RIGHT.
BOOM.
Reply
nor words pried from over-thumped thesauri.
thankfully, the right to voice his mission
gives also our freedom not to listen.
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