Comments | cantbesilent: lost ff: so now we're here and now is fine (sawyer/juliet)

cantbesilent

lost ff: so now we're here and now is fine (sawyer/juliet)

May 12, 2009 19:26

She sweeps over him, legs falling down on either side, keeping and holding him there. His hands tease her, fingering the buttons of her blouse slowly, scoffing at the notion of time and urgency.

He knows she likes the ease of it; time has allowed him to learn the map of her moods and the subtext of her touch. He was a quick study, an eager ( Read more... )

juliet burke owns my soul, lost is the greatest show ever, sawyer and juliet, fanfic

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roseys_fics May 18 2009, 17:34:23 UTC

Gosh this is incredible! I know you wrote it pre-finale, and I would have loved it then too, I'm sure, but it was wonderful to find this now after the finale and remind me of how good they were together. Thank you for writing this! :)
p.s mind if I friend you? :)

cantbesilent May 18 2009, 19:07:59 UTC

Thank you so much. The fact that you liked it after the finale makes me very happy, its been a difficult few days to say the least (read: I'm a basket case).

Friend away!

strandedinaber May 19 2009, 10:28:56 UTC

*feels all warm and fuzzy* What a gorgeous fic - thank you :)

cantbesilent May 19 2009, 17:25:02 UTC

No, really, thank you for reading and commenting, I'm so pleased you like it.

afishwithawish May 24 2009, 20:52:49 UTC

This is too sweet!!! *o* I loved it!

cantbesilent May 24 2009, 21:52:19 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad.

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cantbesilent May 28 2009, 06:09:38 UTC

Thank you! I haven't gotten over the finale either. Is that something that can be gotten over? I don't think so. Writing these makes me feel better so I'm glad it did the same for you. Thanks for reading and commenting, I really do appreciate it!

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cantbesilent May 28 2009, 19:48:25 UTC

Oh how funny! Josh and Donna are like the classics for me. But as much as I loved writing I could never write for any other ship, no matter how much I tried. But then S/J came along and I just can't help myself, they just flow right out of me! Which I find very ironic considering in a million years I never would imagine I would fall for them so hard. :)

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icequeen3101 May 31 2009, 18:12:22 UTC

Beautiful written,
I think this was my favorite part:

But there are things he likes too, so he pulls her back from him and she laughs lightly (but deeply, in a way that has both charmed and confused him) till she meets his eyes with a sultry smile.

I wish we'd more scenes of her laughing on the show.

cantbesilent May 31 2009, 20:00:08 UTC

Thank you. Me too. I wish we had seen more of her happy, period, but it's Lost, so what do you expect? Sigh.

icequeen3101 May 31 2009, 20:26:04 UTC

Yeah, as soon as Lost characters are happy... doom is lurking around a corner *glares at the lost writers*

I don't know what I expected, but certainly not what we got in the finale :/

cantbesilent May 31 2009, 20:49:58 UTC

I'm almost mad at myself for falling for them so hard and for believing that they wouldn't do what they did. I should have known better! They sucked me in instantly, it was so sweet and beautiful and nice, and then ripped my heart out and threw it down a hole. Those fuckers! They torment me so!

I do hold out cautiously optimistic hope that some good still lingers out there. :)