Comments | cantbesilent: lost ff: scribbled on the backs of railway guides (s/j)

cantbesilent

lost ff: scribbled on the backs of railway guides (s/j)

Jun 18, 2009 12:54

title: scribbled on the backs of railway guides
pairing: james+jules
word count: 1812
summary: 30 more sentences over 3 years
notes: title taken from auden's o tell me the truth about love and prompts taken from 1sentence. the first batch can be found here. i am truly addicted to writing them, it is sad and pathetic but fun and perfect for someone with little ( Read more... )

lost is the greatest show ever, sawyer and juliet, fanfic

Comments 33

afishwithawish June 18 2009, 17:45:32 UTC

Ohh!! I am glad you wrote more! ^^ Loved them all!! My personal favourites: Life, New & Picture! <33

cantbesilent June 18 2009, 21:39:15 UTC

I'm so glad! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment.

pengyn June 18 2009, 17:56:26 UTC

Once again, I've really enjoyed these. They all work so wonderfully, and I gotta say some of them broke my heart just a little there. Child, Drink, Life, Names, New, and Picture are my favourites!

cantbesilent June 18 2009, 21:41:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed. And thanks for the comment, I love seeing what people's favorites are, it is always so interesting to compare it to my own thoughts (Life is my favorite).

some of them broke my heart just a little there

Does it make me a bad person if that's what I was going for? ;)

Thank you again, I really, reallyappreciate it!

pengyn June 19 2009, 20:18:36 UTC

Does it make me a bad person if that's what I was going for? ;)

Yes it makes you a terrible person :p

Or an evil genius.

One of the two :D

scandaloussteph June 18 2009, 19:26:32 UTC

I love these, there so spot on.

I think my favourite is "Child".

cantbesilent June 18 2009, 21:42:42 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed them!

just gorgeous anonymous June 18 2009, 20:21:26 UTC

i'm not on LJ so I had to make an anonymous comment, but I just wanted to tell you that these are beautifully written. You are a very talented writer and I hope you're not limiting yourself to fanfics (but keep them coming, of course!). Thank you for sharing.

miss_atom June 18 2009, 20:38:58 UTC

I really, really adore the unknown one. I kind of really want that for them. I want them to be happy and normal and oh... they are so tragic!

These are all great, I usually don't like shorter things (can't get shorter than a sentence) but you have written and captured some beautiful moments in only a sentence!

♥

cantbesilent June 18 2009, 21:47:17 UTC

I know, I want that for them, too. That is why those 2 minutes of ignorant bliss in FTL after they get on the sub but before Kate comes down are so wonderful to me, when that possibility for the "real world" is out there. They're so, guh. Why!?

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for the compliment, it really means a lot to me to know you liked them. I really do love writing these so it makes me happy that others like them as well. :)