Three's A Crowd [880]

Nov 29, 2009 10:22

Fandom: Star Trek XI
Characters/Pairing: Spock/McCoy/Kirk
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: Focus on the romantic relationship between Spock, McCoy, and Kirk.

A/N: Originally posted here.

Leonard was not a jealous man, per se. )

[rating] pg-13, [fanfiction] star trek, [fanfiction]

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blcwriter November 29 2009, 16:59:49 UTC
Nicely done-- so nice that this wasn't really schmoopy at all, and that they three are work, and yet work despite the work that it takes. Nicely done.

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cantfindreverse November 29 2009, 17:19:25 UTC
Thank you! I'm not much for fairy tale fics, myself, so I try to write things that are at least semi-realistic. I find the fights and arguments as interesting as the getting together.

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jademac2442 November 29 2009, 18:18:41 UTC
So awkward and beautiful. Felt very realistic.

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cantfindreverse November 29 2009, 19:50:09 UTC
Thank you very much! I think 'awkward and beautiful' is one of the best compliments I could get.

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Awww :-) testa_dura December 1 2009, 03:16:32 UTC
That was the first threesome fic I've ever read that I really liked.

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jaxinthebox December 18 2009, 04:59:13 UTC
Adorable. I loved the complicated sleeping conditions and who gets kicked out of bed... adorable!

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the_archandroid October 18 2010, 16:01:57 UTC
oh this was nice, it was just so damned REAL, i like that you don't just go for the schmoop factor and your bring up some legitimate issues and concerns, but still give the sweetness of it all in the meld. and really, even the issues and concerns have a kind of vulnerable sweetness to them too, especially Bones' concern about being left out of the equation.
nice!

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