Fic: Here Comes the Moon (Zayn/Harry, R)

Sep 10, 2012 22:51


Title: Here Comes the Moon
Pairing: Zayn/Harry
Rating: R
Summary: It's quite simple, really. Harry comes home from the bakery -- flour trapped between the threads of his beanie, a few quid in his pocket in tips -- before his boyfriend can leave his art studio so that he can cook up a storm for him. [on AO3]
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beethemonster September 11 2012, 14:20:57 UTC
ohdeargod, this was beautiful. seriously, perfect even. i love it ♥ !

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cantgetnoworse September 13 2012, 01:07:47 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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snuffleslove September 12 2012, 03:19:47 UTC
what omg
srsly how

you write ~beautifully

He's tried the drink-until-you-vomit-your-insides-on-the-sidewalk route. He's tried the ecstasy pills that had him aching for days after because he'd swung his limbs in ways they didn't quite fancy swinging. He's tried the all-nighters smoking pot in his best mate's cellar while watching films from before they were born, eating stale crisps and guzzling a disturbing amount of fizzy drinks that had gone flat. He's tried the boys who would shag him against beer-stained sheets and make him scream with a release that rocked his entire body but would lock hands with their girlfriends the next day, avoiding his gaze even though they were in three of his same lectures. He's tried the boys who would let him fuck them into the wall but would never say they loved him, just that he made them want to drop to their knees and possibly that he'd left them feeling emptier than before ( ... )

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cantgetnoworse September 13 2012, 01:10:10 UTC
THIS COMMENT, THOUGH. It is the best of the best and I mostly want to print it out and cuddle with it and let it sing me to sleep. Because like, that's totally normal, right?! Thank you so much! ♥♥♥

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snuffleslove September 13 2012, 01:55:56 UTC
don'ttt cuddle with it cuddle with ~meee.

hehhh hi, i'm natasha :)

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cantgetnoworse September 15 2012, 01:06:22 UTC
*cuddles* Hi, hi, hi, Natasha -- call me M! (Always excited to make new 1D friends. <3)

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together4never September 12 2012, 03:29:14 UTC
This was super lovely. The way you wrote this was equal parts heady and comforting, definitely a nice piece to read after work! Thank you for posting.

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cantgetnoworse September 13 2012, 01:10:32 UTC
Thank you, thank you. Heady and comforting, such a nice combo -- so glad it worked for you. ♥

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wildefiree September 13 2012, 03:18:01 UTC
ugh i LOVEEEEEED this. the domesticity. the settling down. harry's search and craving for simplicity and ZAYN. UGH i love the description of him. sweet and persistent and passionate and artsy and the prose in this was written so beautifully. the words are so calm and just GORGEOUS

Zayn always gets an unbeatable rush after finishing a piece, always fucks Harry so fervently, so passionately, so appreciatively as he murmurs words into his neck that sound unmistakably like muse, muse, muse.

P E R F E CT

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cantgetnoworse September 15 2012, 01:08:44 UTC
Thank you so much! Whenever I write these two, the words just automatically come out somehow... calmer and slower; I'm so very glad they resonated with you. ♥

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cantgetnoworse September 20 2012, 04:39:18 UTC
Ugh, thanks so much for the lovely feedback! I'm just a sucker for these two. ♥

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