It's Strange to Miss Someone You Don't Remember | Part 3/?

Mar 26, 2012 20:12



Title: It’s Strange to Miss Someone You Don’t Remember
Part: 3/??
Fandoms: Generation Kill
Pairings/Characters: Brad/Ray, imagined Walt
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,526 (6,424 WIP)
Warnings: Adult language, themes, and sexual content (There is porn in this chapter)
Disclaimer: I do not own the show, or the fictional interpretations from which this is based ( Read more... )

brad colbert, ray person, generation kill, brad x ray

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veronibell March 27 2012, 05:06:26 UTC
GAH!!! I want to cry!
cause of Brad being an idiot and not telling Ray the damn truth. For Ray cause he is going to be sad when he does find out. And just in general cause this is fantastic!
I smiled at the image of Brad falling asleep on Ray.

This is destroying me!!!!
But I love it!!!!

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canuckchicklett March 28 2012, 03:30:41 UTC
I've got a box tissues, if you need them.

Darling, we're already internet married, you don't have to say things like that anymore. XD

OMG. I was so pleased with myself when I imagined that part. Now I want someone to draw it, because I think it would be an adorable picture. :D

It's destroying you because you love it. It works that way with all things. The best foods will give you heart attacks, alcohol can poison you.... all the good things in life are destructive.

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veronibell March 28 2012, 05:18:57 UTC
If I had an artistic boe in my body I would totally draw that, however I don't :(

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canuckchicklett March 28 2012, 03:57:11 UTC
Also, I just wanted to let you know that the next part will be a flashback with adorable Walt. (Unfortunately, that also includes Stupid Brad, but I think Walt takes precedence in this case!)

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unomega March 27 2012, 05:18:58 UTC
I'm glad to have helped. Consider me a clutch-beta should the need ever arise again.

As you very well know, I was very mad at you during parts of this, primarily when Stupid Brad kept imaging Walt and not appreciating that Ray was right there. And because Brad is being dumb and not telling Ray the truth, but I'm sure you won't disappoint and bring a nice resolution for everyone (i.e. Brad and Ray getting married, legally or spiritually).

I'm not being subtle at all (but, ugh fine, I trust you to lead this whichever way your heart desires. And I shall still read it regardless).

Job well done bud!

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canuckchicklett March 28 2012, 03:27:05 UTC
I still can't thank you enough for that! You have my eternal love.

I can't stop you from being mad at me. In fact, I think I shall take that as a compliment, because that means I'm doing a decent job. So, thank you. I hope to get you angry at me in the future. XD

You're mind is pretty set on where you want this to go. I promise I will do my best to finish in a pleasing way, even if it's not that exact ending. I promise.

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unomega March 28 2012, 05:17:37 UTC
I'm hardly the person you need to cater to, so if you need to break my heart a little... I guess I won't hold it against you. That much.

Can't promise that I won't hold it a little against you.

Can't wait to see as you update!

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loubee77 March 28 2012, 14:33:48 UTC
Argh, Silly Brad! Just tell your Ray-Ray what is going on (and stop thinking about Walt as well!)

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