so i was going to quote a bunch of this but i'm too tired at the moment and thus, i'll just randomly write.
some of the vocabulary you used here was pretty awesome. i must sound odd for complimenting you on that, but there you are. jongkey is beyond being the most fabulous biffles in history while jongho is pretty much exactly as i picture them, bromance and all. and most of their - shinee's as a whole - verbal banter had me smiling like an idiot. but of course, jongyu set my little heart aflutter. great fic. ♥
I usually try to flip through a favorite novel or something before I start writing, let it simmer along with my capacity to construct coherent sentences or whatever -- so I'm glad the vocab worked out! Glad that it's realistic too -- not used to writing Jonghyun/everyone, so it's a relief it turned out ok :) Thanks for reading! <3
everything felt real. from the dialogue, from the relationships, from the thoughts, all of it felt like that is legitimately what is going on with shinee right now (except the whole jongyu falling in love thing but you know). i love how easy it is to read your writing. it's not poetic à la shakespeare or something, but it's simple and beautiful imagery.
A few days later, Jonghyun catches Minho tucking a bag of chocolate-covered coffee beans under Jinki's pillow. "I just feel so bad," he confesses.
i don't know why exactly, but i was gutted when i read that.
I'm happy to hear that -- it's kinda tough to get the exact perspective you're aiming for when you're writing (and/or know how it originally was before editing, aka pure crap) so I'm REALLY glad it seems "realistic."
i don't know why exactly, but i was gutted when i read that. SWEET. XD
Wow. Just... Wow. That was amazing. The images were so real and vivid, I felt like I was right there with them, experiencing all these emotions that Jonghyun and Jinki felt. I love how it actually seems like these things happened, like it's a factual retelling rather than a fanfic lol. I think you really captured jonghyun's relationships with each of the members, and of course how he's always silently caring for jinki :] Oh, and since I'm a sucker for cheesy pick up lines, I absolutely adore the last line. Mem-ing this. Marvelous fic <3
So, so glad to hear that the Jonghyun interactions worked for you -- it was my biggest worry!
Oh, and since I'm a sucker for cheesy pick up lines, I absolutely adore the last line. Couldn't help but use it, considering the places they've been in one summer XD
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some of the vocabulary you used here was pretty awesome. i must sound odd for complimenting you on that, but there you are. jongkey is beyond being the most fabulous biffles in history while jongho is pretty much exactly as i picture them, bromance and all. and most of their - shinee's as a whole - verbal banter had me smiling like an idiot. but of course, jongyu set my little heart aflutter. great fic. ♥
p.s. i'm probably going to mem this.
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A few days later, Jonghyun catches Minho tucking a bag of chocolate-covered coffee beans under Jinki's pillow. "I just feel so bad," he confesses.
i don't know why exactly, but i was gutted when i read that.
lovely, lovely story. ♥
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i don't know why exactly, but i was gutted when i read that.
SWEET. XD
Thanks so much for reading <3
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i'm still quite awe-inspired, but this... this is absolutely beautiful. *O*
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Oh, and since I'm a sucker for cheesy pick up lines, I absolutely adore the last line.
Mem-ing this. Marvelous fic <3
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Oh, and since I'm a sucker for cheesy pick up lines, I absolutely adore the last line.
Couldn't help but use it, considering the places they've been in one summer XD
Thanks so much, really appreciate it <3
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