HMD meme!

[capn_freakshow]

It's been almost a year since we had one, so it's now time for

MICROCOSM RP'S HMD MEME

Anonymous commenting is ON. IP logging is OFF. Post here with your character's name and journal name and people will come and give you constructive criticism. Emphasis on the 'constructive' part there, guys - if we see people being negative without leaving

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[grant_a_song]

Tear Grants | grant_a_song

Lethe | tsunhsstsun

Rutee Kartret | havetocharge

Archer | fieldofblades

Really looking for concrit on Archer and Tear most of all here.

[saketiems]

grant_a_song Is the only one I know the canon for, I'm afraid. Basically, the more I watch the series, the more I think you're doing an excellent job.

[grant_a_song]

Ah, thank you .///. I've been kind of worried about her recently.

[saketiems]

Can't wait to play her Van

I am almost done with the app!

[scruffyfeathers]

I'm on my way out the door, but I'll leave this here before I go. :|b

Tibarn ~ scruffyfeathers

Miura Haru ~ hahimafiaboy

Yune ~ not-the-sue

Arisawa Tatsuki ~ dragonbazooka

Haru is my newest but also the one I'm most wiffly about, so. |Db I should also have HMD posts up in all their journals. :|b

[scruffyfeathers]

I can't get over how much I love your Tibarn. The way you've believably put him in this sort of setting and the interactions awes me since well, he's a NINTENDO character.

[scruffyfeathers]

Anon is very kind. .////. ♥

[lady_serenes]

Tibarn. Is. GOD.

I can't honestly crit the guy, you play him too well.

Haru I know nothing about.

Tatsuki is well-done. She doesn't jump out at me, but I do like playing off her with Yoruichi.

And Yune...

Oh Yune. Playing off her with Martel is a joy. She's amazing, she's childlike but wise, fun yet kind of distrubing at times. Well, just look at Martel's reaction when she vanished! If anything, I just want to see more of her. More sticking her nose where it doesn't belong, more pulling bizarre stunts, more asking Martel weird questions. Just... more more more, that's the only advice I can give. And that's because I'm greedy.

[wrenchgenius]

Winry Rockbell -- wrenchgenius

Any comments or suggestions would be appreciated!

[petit_homme]

Your Winry is very sweet. I'm still too new to FMA in any version to comment sensibly on how well you're playing her. But I like sweet and direct in a young lady.

[wrenchgenius]

Eeee, thanks! Though I sometimes worry I play her a little too sweet, whoops.

[petit_homme]

From the little I know, she's sweet to most people. Really. She's temperamental with reason with the Elric brothers and people who don't take her work seriously. I haven't seen her get too bent out of shape over other things. Does that help?

[vigilantphoenix]

Guy Cecil - vigilantphoenix

He's a brand new muse, so any and all help is most welcome. |D

[grant_a_song]

sob even though Tear hasn't had a chance to interact with him yet, I've been watching his threads. Guy doesn't freak about much, women exempt from this, and you've caught his mild bewilderment nicely, along with the slightly morbid, subconscious attachment to machines and his unshakable loyalty to Luke.

/kind of wants to put it on anon to hide the fact she's a creepy stalker

[vigilantphoenix]

I'm really relieved to hear you think I'm doing okay so far. ♥ Guy's levelheadedness, being a stark contrast to characters I usually play, is one of his main charms for me.

Haha~ No need to! I'm a horrible creepy stalker just the same. XD

[grant_a_song]

To be completely honest, I really can't wait to throw Tear at him(maybe literally in a crazy situation) ♥

[capn_freakshow]

I play:

redrisngphoenix - Ling Tong
book_em_nanao - Ise Nanao
holyfight - Inoue Orihime
and1forall - Ishida Mitsunari

And if you have crit for Mayuri, that's cool too.

[capn_freakshow]

I adore book_em_nanao. It's really hard to find Nanao players who actually play her with a personality! She has a strong sense of propriety, and people often let that get in the way of her interactions with others, I guess? But, she's a lady with some soft spots, and you show that incredibly well.

[book_em_nanao]

Th-Thank you! I often worry I'm not making her tsuntsun enough, but I don't think it's something she should do all the time, either.

[saketiems]

book_em_nanao Obviously you know I love Nanao, she's everything I could have hoped for and more. The only minor point I would make is, I miss the bookings >>; Even though they are together, Shunsui is an irrepressible flirt and could use a good book to the face once in a while!

capn_freakshow Please post and tag with him more, that's my only crit.