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[capn_freakshow]

MICROCOSM RP'S JULY HMD MEME

Anonymous commenting is ON. IP logging is OFF. Post here with your character's name and journal name and people will come and give you constructive criticism. Emphasis on the 'constructive' part there, guys - if we see people being negative without leaving suggestions for improvement, or just being downright nasty, we

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[holyfight]

I play:

holyfight // Inoue Orihime
and1forall // Ishida Mitsunari
capn_freakshow // Kurotsuchi Mayuri
mybigblackphone // Kurotsuchi Nemu

I know I've been a bit scarce with them, but I have been making an effort to get the three I don't play as much out and about lately.

[holyfight]

Uwaaaah! Thank you!

How far are you now?

[midsummersdemon]

◢ mion sonozaki 》 midsummersdemon 》 higurashi no naku koro ni 》 anon-enabled post

[midsummersdemon]

♥ One day, she and Helen'll have to go wreak some havoc on Micro.

LOL I LOVE THAT ICON, BTW.

[vectored_lilium]

I HAVE ACTUALLY WATCHED HIGURASHI NOW!

So, surely this means I have some actually useful crit for you, right? I mean, something aside from "I was at a Con over the weekend and I still come back to find you haven't tagged our threads, don't make me get the whip", surely? Wellllll...

Not exactly. I would say that I almost never seem to see you bring out Mion's more serious (downright badass, one could argue) side unless it's for the sole purpose of stomping on her pride, but... well, when would you? It's like my problem with bringing out Lucy's insane killer side, their situations in Micro don't really lend themselves to it. So I don't really know what to say about it that would actually be at all helpful. I guess the best advice I can give is to keep your eyes open for situations that might work to exercise the parts of her personality you don't usually get the chance to use.

Not that that's helped me any, but eh.

[the_worlds_hero]

I play:

the_worlds_hero || Axis Powers Hetalia
antivirus_girl || Venus Versus Virus

[yoctogram]

America is adorkable and I'm really glad that I tagged him for Rika's baby since it led to the threading we've been doing.

[the_worlds_hero]

I've been enjoying those threads as well. America's become pretty fond of Rika, and I think it's oddly cute how patient she's been with him. I haven't read her canon yet, but she's an interesting character.

[yoctogram]

>.> Her canon is some paranormal romances-slash-softcore porn. She's a very minor character with less than a dozen lines over three books, mostly she's referred to.

[ink_blotter]

I've got:

Walter Kovacs || ink_blotter
Agnes Nitt/Perdita Dream || perditaxxxnitt
Greebo || cat_harrassment
Dr. Herbert West || dead_rising

[dead_black_eyes]

I think you probably have an idea of how much I adore every one of your kids. AND OH HEY here's why.

Walter: I've played Rorschach before in games kind of like this, and I know how tough he is to do well. I love how you balance his "Walter" persona with his "Rorschach" identity, giving him two distinct faces in-game to work with; it's very consistent with how he behaves in canon. One thing that's extremely different in Micro as opposed to his "home world" is the amount of relying on others a person has to do; what Nite Owl says about "living off people while insulting them" comes to mind, but I actually really like how you return him to his profession as a tailor and make Walter more willing to communicate and get along with others as he lives and works in the city. It's also been interesting (and sweet) to see how he's developed a civil, mutual relationship with Spanner; it reminds me of how he latched onto Dan in the graphic novel and movie. You play him with a dutiful sense of stoicism; he never gets too emotional to be

[ink_blotter]

Since there has been a Nite Owl in the game for a long time it seems odd that he would latch on to Spanner like "how he latched onto Dan." It's a shame they don't interact more, but maybe it is just a matter of the player not being around. But the relationship with Spanner always felt a little forced.

[dead_black_eyes]

I'll second that, wishing that Dan and Rorschach interacted more, though the player goes poof and sometimes I do forget we have a Nite Owl.

[rearoftheyear]

Jack Harkness rearoftheyear
David Posner smallgayjew
Lucifer morningstar-ret

[dead_black_eyes]

I've only threaded with Lucifer, and this limited range makes me sad. I promise to tag into your other kids' threads one of these days. ;_;

I really like how your Lucifer isn't nice, while he doesn't typically go out of his way to be outright mean. He's got a little bit of unapproachability and arrogance to him that is totally believable in a devil character, and sometimes he's also weirdly, awesomely relatable. As the devil should be. I haven't read his canon (I'M GOING TO), but I really think you're doing it right.

[rearoftheyear]

Aww, thanks! I hope you still feel that way after reading his canon. >.>

*is always afraid she's doing it wrong*

[rearoftheyear]

I really like your characters, especially Jack and Lucifer, but I don't usually see them out. You seem to keep most of your activity to posts you run, instead of tagging a lot of posts already out there. Which there's nothing wrong with, as it's some people's preference. But, your posts are kind of hard to reply to and when I've tried I often struggle to keep a conversation going, which makes it hard for me to play with you. I don't know if it's my characters or yours, but I thought I'd mention it.

Sorry for the anon.