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[capn_freakshow]

MICROCOSM RP'S JULY HMD MEME

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[six_tentacles]

Luppi Antenor | six_tentacles
Senna | nobodysmemory

[biifurcatiion]

Senna just feels bland to me. We've had a couple threads with a couple different characters now, going all the way back to when I played Walter Dornez, and really they've all been the same thread, whether it's Walter or Eridan. I couldn't begin to tell you what her personality really is, because her replies feel generic, and thus it's difficult to get any threads with her going at all because there's just hardly nothing there to work with

[six_tentacles]

With Senna I'm trying to build up into a conversation instead of just jumping down people's throats with optimism all the time. True, she does that to Ichigo (AFTER Ichigo confronted her about the ribbon and other things that lead into their friendship, and she's really into grabbing other people's attentions, but I think she can at least grasp situations enough to talk to people normally if she hasn't befriended them yet. She's really perky, but she doesn't go out of her way to pop up in someone's face just for a conversation.

As for the remarks on Rangiku thing, that was sort of during a fight, hitting on people you are about to gut is sort of weird. But given the setting, I feel like he can more freely harass or approach women with. I wasn't aware it was such a big thing though. I can pull it back if it really makes you uncomfortable personally.

[biifurcatiion]

The problem is I don't even get any of the perky. She just feels like Generic Nice Girl #57 at the moment, which is in turn making the threads awkward and bland, and if she's meant to be perky, that's not really coming across. If she's meant to be jumping down people's throats with optimism, don't hold back on that; I don't know why you would, because that's much more interesting than what's going on right now. That would actually give something to respond to

Chips

[missingmynormal]

Kurosaki Ichigo | Bleach | missingmynormal

[ps_you_look_hot]

Nikola Tesla ps-you-look-hot
Jack Harkness rearoftheyear
David Posner smallgayjew
Orpheus golden-lyre
Eddie Blake/the Comedian nospelled-y-e-s

[silver_odessa]

I really enjoy threading with you. I think you do an outstanding job with Eddie. He's not an easy character to handle, but you manage to keep him IC, yet at the same time easy to thread with. I remember reading a thread of Eddie and Dan, back in the phone event (where people kept telling the truth) and just ... wow. Spot on.

[holyfight]

holyfight | Inoue Orihime
petulantlilgirl | Sarugaki Hiyori
theleijonsl33ps | Nepeta Leijon

and occasionally

capn_freakshow | Kurotsuchi Mayuri
realrealdoll | Kurotsuchi Nemu

[she_godmodes]

she_godmodes | God (Dogma)