hindsight

[capnfantastico]

Title: Hindsight
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia, LHDP
Rating: NC-17

A/N first fic, couldn't resist Juney's call to arms. sorry it's sorry. let's see if i can actually figure out how to post it.

In hindsight, Pepa was willing to admit that referring to Silvia as a bottom in front of Don Lorenzo may have been inappropriate.

She'd gotten caught up in the laughing

Comments

[mmm_kekse]

That was just really really really great!!! Thanks so much!!

[capnfantastico]

thank you! this whole replying to comments thing is really ego inflating! nobody writes "you suck"! i was expecting some "suck"s. :)

[foot_print_1]

I loved it.. mmm, smut goodness!!!
Cute and sexy and hot all at the same time. You made me drool all over myself. ;)

[capnfantastico]

that whole drooling thing sounds super attractive. i'm so happy i could elicit such a sexy response :)

[sumatrabean]

This is officially my favorite pepa/silvia story ever. :)

[capnfantastico]

wow, i think you have some back reading to do! thank you very much, i appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. i was kinda nervous, and could have rewritten it about a bajillion more times, so i'm happy people liked it!

[sumatrabean]

I'll have you know that I've been a faithful reader here since early last summer, thank you. :)

The story just happened to be wonderfully written, fun, and more than a little erotic. I especially liked the little details like when Pepa blew her bangs out of her eyes and when she realized that she'd have to start over from the beginning. And I loved how Silvia stood in the doorway and asked Pepa if she was pleased with herself. Your dialogue just flows.

Thanks for that. It truly was a pleasure to read.

[capnfantastico]

*blushes* thanks

[supercontenta]

This was your first story? Well, by the gods, you MUST write more!! It was great! Sexy, funny, and I loved the top/bottom "storyline" <--- notice the quotation marks.

Please make us all happy and write future stories for all of us to enjoy!! That's an order! ;)

[capnfantastico]

yes'm

[junebuggy01]

Um... *Thinks* I'm trying to think of an intelligent way to say that was fucking hot and awesome!

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Uh... I got nothing. That was fucking hot and awesome Madame Capn. I'm so happy that you participated! *Hugs you*

[capnfantastico]

*hugs back* *does a 'i got a hug from junebuggy' dance*