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First Time [Part one of three]

Jan 11, 2012 17:29

Title: First time
Summary: Ian and Anthony return from a party, where Anthony had a few drinks. Alcohol gives bravery, but takes away control. How far will they go?
Rating/Warnings: PG13 (NC-17 in later parts); implied drunkenness, gay kissing, make-out, suggestive of soon-to-come sexual actions
Disclaimer: If this really happened, then bitch, I must ( Read more... )

kiss, ian, ianthony, pg13, anthony, guys, hecox, smosh, make out, padilla, yaoi, drunk, gay, bromance, boys

Comments 5

smosh4ever January 12 2012, 00:16:13 UTC

Ooooh, I can already tell this is gonna get good! Great writing; I love how poetic it is. I can't wait for part 2!

destiel09 January 12 2012, 01:09:51 UTC

Wow, I second smosh4ever for the poetic thing. It's really beautiful! I can't wait for part two. Seriously, your writing is so well!!

michaelangelo24 January 12 2012, 02:37:39 UTC

Apparently smutty poetry is one of the few types of poetry I like. xD I loved the two stanzas about unfamiliar it was, yet it felt right. :)

smoshluva January 12 2012, 08:20:04 UTC

:D :D amazing as always

boredomdelux January 13 2012, 23:59:42 UTC

dude, this is brilliant!! I love the way you write it like a poem, but it's not. It creates and entirely different mood, and makes everything floaty and dreamy and breathtaking. You sir, are a genius.

This could definitely become like a new genre or something. I've never seen anyone write quite like this before.. Mind=blown!