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capnjuicebox

Bahamas. (1/2)

Jun 25, 2012 02:20

Title: Bahamas
Summary: Ian and Anthony, still getting used to being in a relationship, take a trip to the Bahamas. Ian gets nervous when Anthony starts sending him signs that he's ready to move on to the next stage of the relationship. Sex.
Rating/Warnings: PG13 (NC17 in second part.); Gay kissing, making-out, suggestive language/actions, sexual ( Read more... )

honestly i'm too lazy to add tags :p

Comments 22

jackiestolz June 25 2012, 17:00:50 UTC

Haha, this fic makes me miss the Bahamas. This is so cute, I love how nervous Ian is. Excited for the next chapter :)

capnjuicebox June 25 2012, 17:24:28 UTC

Ugh you're so lucky, it's my dream vacation. Though I've been to Jamaica, so I can't complain. d: Thank you!! c:

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capnjuicebox June 25 2012, 17:25:40 UTC

Thank you so much. The next part will be up soon, captain's word! I want to go there wicked bad, it sounds amazing!

rahhicecream June 25 2012, 21:44:54 UTC

Ahh this was just too sweeet!! <3 and it's soo cute how nervous ian is! :D I love it!

capnjuicebox June 25 2012, 22:11:17 UTC

Ha ha thanks! c: I thought it'd be pretty necessary to make Ian a nervous mess, in a situation like this, I think anyone would be going through thousands of horrible scenarios in their mind. x3

9800andseagulls June 26 2012, 00:00:37 UTC

OH MY GOD.
I DON'T EVEN.
WHAT THE?
SO MANY FEELS.
You are amazing capnjuicebox, I can't believe how brilliantly this is written, are you kidding me?! I DREAM of writing like this.
I was so there in the brush watching btw, the way you described it was so goddamn realistic.
THIS WAS PERFECTION
I don't see how you could make a part two any better but I bet you soooo do. :3

capnjuicebox June 26 2012, 05:52:05 UTC

Goodness, aren't you rude, having all these high expectations of me...and complimenting me...;P No, really, thank you so much. -3 Hopefully you'll have the same reaction to part two! I'm thinking I might need to split it into three parts, depending on how much I end up adding on. We'll see...C:

sinfulparagraph June 26 2012, 03:16:53 UTC

ohmygoodness i lovelovelove your writing style. i'm new, so it's nice to meet you. [:
this story is so amazing & there's gonna be smut & i can hardly wait! :D
wait...you ship desandnate too? ahhhh that's so awesome! i thought i was the only one!

capnjuicebox June 26 2012, 05:59:27 UTC

Thank you, thank you, thank you! =3 Nice to meet ye, too, mate. My sailor bit is incredibly corny, but you'll get used to it, ha ha. And yep, I ship it! There's not a lot of us, but there's a few. c: There's actually a community on LJ for Nestery..it hasn't really taken off yet, but I'll definitely be posting soon. Here's the link if you're interested: http://desandnateslash.livejournal.com/