nightime story!

Dec 01, 2005 00:04

pulling the blanket from his eyes, he crept from the safety of his bed, ventured into the darkness with one hand; the other reached toward Jumi, his guardian bear on the bed, and stole his way to the lightswitch he knew instinctually to be three feet from the ground and two feet from the door, meaning an arms length to our brave adventurer. with a ( Read more... )

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ltmagnificent December 3 2005, 09:15:33 UTC
ok so I have gone over this like five times and I just dont get the last line... I mean it seems to me the ghosts got to aaron but I dont get if it is the ghosts saying goodnight to the bear before they do in his master or if it is the narrator saying that Jumi was in kahoots with the ghosts?
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well.. capntempleton December 5 2005, 04:07:33 UTC
ived decided that the last line is the title.. of this excerpt. im going to make it bigger, stronger, drive a faster car. and whe i am done!? ill post it. :] but im very excited at the direction its taking in my head.

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