The Best Moments of My Life

May 10, 2005 22:06

My hands are numb
The Sun is setting
The Sweat is in my eye
The tears are out of my eye
The water is flat
The strokes are hard
My hands are slipping
And there is a mile ahead of me
But i can't see it

that is more of a list than a poem, but read it how you want, cause i don't care.

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mattw3rtz May 11 2005, 02:35:09 UTC
haha that entry was cool

especially the last line

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daveycrockett May 11 2005, 15:28:42 UTC
i like it

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