Comments | capriciouswind: Smallville Fanfic: Infinite Loop

capriciouswind

Smallville Fanfic: Infinite Loop

Dec 08, 2008 14:50

Title: Infinite Loop ( Read more... )

smallville, fanfiction

Comments 23

vodooman December 8 2008, 06:18:47 UTC

wow... that was really a great fic...

... and the ending...

capriciouswind December 8 2008, 11:04:56 UTC

Aww, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Especially since I reconsidered posting it. lol.

legendarytobes December 8 2008, 16:11:31 UTC

I love it. That loop bit is so amazing and well thought out and tragic at the same time.

capriciouswind December 8 2008, 23:38:01 UTC

Thanks! In some ways, I think this would be a perfect way to write Chloe off to match comic continuity and have her enter again as a "new" character. Get rid of Clark's past memories of Chloe and the Clois this season would make a lot more sense to me.

iliana_1 December 8 2008, 19:03:39 UTC

Guh! It's perfect. The concept is a little mind blowing and you've executed it perfectly. I think this will have to be added to my favourites list.

Of course, now I want you to write more Chlark.

capriciouswind December 8 2008, 23:32:21 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it since I adore your writing so much. :) And I do have other Chlark stories in mind, but I have a tendency to get them started and not finish them so I never post them. LOL. But in light of the current season, living in fictionland is what makes me happy atm.

vagrantdream December 8 2008, 19:17:00 UTC

Lovely concept. This is the way I like chlark. Awesome. Sad and awesome and open-ended. Totally going to be favorited. :)

capriciouswind December 8 2008, 23:48:31 UTC

Thanks so much! I admit, as much as I want Chlark to be happy in the end, I love sad fics as well.

kashvi5722 December 9 2008, 01:34:27 UTC

This was heartbreakingly sad, but so beautifully written. So many things to like about this fiction...the fact that Chloe is still fighting for truth and justice; that Clark is helpless in his admiration for and his need to protect her; that despite everything their lives remain entwined. I hope that the loop can be broken and their destiny move forward together. Really good job.

capriciouswind December 9 2008, 02:06:08 UTC

Thank you so much for the kind comments. I'd like to think that even without her memories, she's still got that strong will and determination that makes her one of my favorite fictional characters. I also hope that the loop can be broken.