Prompt Fic (AU)

[capricorn86]

Lisa Braeden always liked to look good. Some may think her a bit vain, the way she`d never leave the house without putting on make-up, or do a quick check of her hair while passing a shop window. Lisa liked to put some effort into always looking her best, and this Saturday afternoon, when she was going to attend her cousin`s birthday party, was by

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[trumansshell]

Great story as always. Ben's belief that it is against the laws of the universe for Grandparents to spank their grandkids was great :)
I also like that John wasn't going to tell Dean about it :)

[capricorn86]

hehe :)
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, glad you enjoyed!

[brassband777]

Oooh, I loved this

[capricorn86]

*high fives you* Awesome that you share my view on Ben, hehe. I am seriously unable to write him in a different way than this, so I`m glad you liked it.

Aww yay :) I love it when my fics make someone smile, I usually try to put a bit of humour into my fics, but I can never know if what I find funny will amuse anyone else, lol.

Thank you so much! :D

[remisfriend26]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
I loved it! It was even better than the prompt, so much better! Actually adored it when John came home and hugged Cara, haha, I LOVE that dog! Loved Mary's interactions with Ben, and I loved John with his grandson. It was so sweet how John was unsure of what to do cause Ben was his Grand son, I could totally imagine it though! And I loved Lisa being all appearance obsessed at the start... Oh, and I loved the flashback about the mobile! Oh, and the references to the boys' childhood! And I loved John and Mary's relationship! And Cara haha ;) Loved the store bit as well - was so realistic! Yeah, I think I may have quite likes this ;) hehe! GREAT JOB, as per! :D

[capricorn86]

HAHAHA! :D
Yay, I`m so pleased and relieved that you like it!
LOL you just love that dog, huh? ;) Aww I love her too! <3 hehe

I`m so glad you enjoyed the interactions between the characters, as well as the memories and references to past events. I really enjoyed putting them in there.

Also glad to know you liked the beginning - Don`t know where that came from, but I felt it was an interesting way to start the story, hehe.

THANK YOU for the amazing feedback, and thanks so much for the AWESOME prompt! (I finally got to write John spanking Ben! Yay!!!)

[remisfriend26]

Hahaha, I must just love that dog ;) I love animals and dogs as pets in particular, especially retrievers so i'm head over heels for that sweet dog! :P LOL!
Ah man, I just love reading your awesome awesome fics, they're always so much fun to read! :d haha, well, if you ever want an excuse to have John metting out some Winchester justice to Ben or the Winchester boys, i'm sure I can come up with plenty of prompts to give you reason ;) haha, you're awesome! :)

[capricorn86]

I love animals too, but I`m particularly fond of cats. My sister did however used to own a Rottweiler that I got very close to. :) I have 3 cats, do you have any pets?

Thank you! Aww, you spoil me with your praise! I always enjoy reading your fics as well, you`re a good writer. :)

When it comes to Ben getting spanked, I`m fine with it being any of the Winchester men being the spanker, hehe. Let me know if you have any more prompts.

[otkcp]

Yet another one of you wonderful fics =)

[capricorn86]

Thank you! :)

[lady_m_319]

Winchester Grandparents at their best. Ben was a brat and deserved a trip over John’s knee. Was surprised John agreed to not tell Dean but that would be the Grandpa in him.
He’s mellowed a bit with age. Liked the flashback memories woven throughout the fic. Entertaining fic. Nicely written.

[capricorn86]

Hehe, thanks. :)
I do like the idea of John being more mellow when he`s a grandparent.