The Way You Lie (Daddy!Dean)

[capricorn86]

Title: The Way You Lie
Author: Capricorn86
Characters: Dean Winchester, Will (14) Dawn (16) Mentioned
Summary: Will spins a web of lies, for the very first time.
Disclaimer: I own nothing (apart from my OCs). No profit is being made.
Warning: Contains spanking of a teen (hand, hairbrush)
Author`s Note: This was inspired by a prompt from hlscruggs. The

Comments

[brassband777]

You made my day with this fic!!! I loved the interaction between Will and Dean throughout. Will definitely deserved to be disciplined, but I could also empathise as I could see where the kid was coming from - he genuinely thought he could go to practice AND get his work done. I felt so sorry for him when he was beating himself up with guilt :(
It was so sweet that Will didn't lie (before this anyway. Hee hee). When he just nodded his head, because he couldn't verbalise the lie, I just went : AWWWWWW!

This amused me:
'Dean turned to his teenaged son. “Get your butt in bed before I smack it there.” “You smacked it already,” Will muttered miserably under his breath.' lol ;)

I adored your daddy Dean in this - first his concern about his 'sick' baby boy and then his genuine worry that he'd spanked too hard. Dean's love for his son is totally transparent here.
Loved every line of it!!! :D

[brassband777]

Oh, and I forgot to say that this line was completely heartwrenching: 'a moment passed before Will spoke again: “Daddy? Do- do you still love me?”' (the 'daddy' made it even more poignant for me)
Adored Dean's reassurance and comfort that he gave in response :D

[capricorn86]

Thank you so much! :D Your comments always make me so happy, hehe!

I`m glad I managed to get Will`s guilt across, and I`m thrilled you picked up on the fact that he didn`t manage to actually utter the lie at first. :D

Pleased that you enjoyed the interactions between Will and Dean - I always find Daddy!Dean more difficult to write for some reason, and I worry I end up making him exactly like John, which is not my intention. I find them similar, but they`re of course two different people. :P

Anyway.. thank you!!

[brassband777]

You really shouldn't worry about how you write daddy!dean - in my opinion you write him just as brilliantly as you write daddy!sam!!! And when I read your daddy!dean or daddy!sam, they're both EXACTLY as I picture them. Hee hee.

[capricorn86]

AWW!! :D Thank you!

[alecx_5]

OMG Okay, before I said Ben/Dean were my favorite but Will/Dean is a very close second <3 I love the Will character so much, I don't know what it is about him but anyway such a great story, as always. Damn near broke my heart with the 'Daddy, do you still love me though.' LoL

[capricorn86]

Teehee! It`s so funny, several people have mentioned that Will is their favourite of my OCs. It amuses me that everyone likes him, lol.
Thank you very much, it means a lot knowing that an OC can be so well liked and that you enjoy these types of stories. :D

[lady_m_319]

It's not nice to lie to daddy!dean. Will's lucky he only got one spanking with the hairbrush. You wrote Will as a typical teen with all the angst and challenges of making the right choices. Dean so showed the boy the error of his choices. It was sensitive and loving of Dean to be concerned he spanked Will too hard. Good of Will to own up to his mistakes. Heart wrenching when Will asked if Dean still loved him. Loved Will's POV through out the fic. Great read.

[capricorn86]

Thank you very much for your kind comment, glad you enjoyed it. :)

[hlscruggs]

Very well written. You wrote Will's struggle with what to do perfectly.

[capricorn86]

Thank you very much, and thanks for giving me the prompt that inspired two stories. :D
Glad Will`s struggle came across clearly.