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Jul 12, 2013 21:44


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itsmecoon July 14 2013, 20:07:32 UTC
Great first chapter. On to the next one!

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capricorn86 July 19 2013, 20:57:55 UTC
Thanks, glad you like it!

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i am loving it ext_1517452 July 15 2013, 02:37:27 UTC
wow a great chapter thanks

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brassband777 August 21 2013, 18:04:36 UTC
You already know what I thought of this fab fic :D I thought I'd comment on it here too. I'm not sure if there is something wrong with my computer though (the other readers don't seem to have had the problem) as the longer sentences are chopped off and just stop so there are words missing. I'll go see if my computer reads the next part correctly....

I do just have to reiterate how much I loved the 'My Emily?' comment. lol ;)
I also think you portrayed Emily perfectly as a teenager :D

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capricorn86 August 27 2013, 20:14:06 UTC
I know there is something up with the format, it`s probably because I have changed the writing program I use and it conflits with LJs format somehow.. not sure.. It certainly is annoying though, and I haven`t bothered fixing it on here yet.

Thanks so much again for your feedback! And I totally agree with your reasons on why you loved that comment, you`re brilliant! :D lol

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