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Jul 12, 2013 21:45

Part 1 here: http://capricorn86.livejournal.com/34706.html

Sam unlocked the front door and stepped inside, calling out for his youngest.

Twelve-year-old Alice came into the hallway and greeted him with a hug. "Hi, Daddy."
"Hi, baby girl. How was school?"
She shrugged. "Meh. How was work?"
Sam smiled down at her. "Pretty `meh` too. Sorry I`m so  ( Read more... )

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khaffman July 13 2013, 02:38:02 UTC
"I`m gonna stop you right there, Sigfried."
Sam snorted a laugh. "I think you mean Sigmund."

My favorite line in a story so far! Sounds exactly like an exchange between them! Great story!

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capricorn86 July 13 2013, 18:31:05 UTC
Wow, thanks, that`s a wonderful compliment! :D Yay!
Thank you, glad you enjoyed!

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itsmecoon July 14 2013, 20:19:43 UTC
I love that Sammy was getting all worried about Emily because he remembers the way things were with him and his dad.
Dean giving advice to Sam was my favorite part.
Loved it. I love this verse.

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capricorn86 July 19 2013, 20:58:49 UTC
Thank you sooo much! :D That comment made me really, really happy!

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that is what dad job is ext_1517452 July 15 2013, 02:42:25 UTC
wow Sam did his fathers job good job

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brassband777 August 21 2013, 18:11:45 UTC
Nope, the sentences are still chopped off - I don't understand why my computer is being daft. Aargh!

I felt Sam was completely fair and right to spank Emily for breaking her grounding. LOVED the interaction between father and daughter after the spanking :D

I also love the way you portray Sam and Dean interacting - you always get their characters spot-on!

A fantastic fic (as always!) :D

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capricorn86 August 27 2013, 20:16:18 UTC
Thank you sooo much, you`re too kind! :D

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spn_princess January 6 2014, 17:05:44 UTC
Another awesome story still loving everyone
Oh Happy Belated Bday. :):);)

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capricorn86 January 12 2014, 18:41:19 UTC
Thanks dear! :D I had a great birthday!

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