on the first day..

[captainjizmo]

The mood was still, the area, quiet

Comments

I think i may be confused..?

[tokken18]

Arr, tis a maze of words you have left for us in this strange tale of deciete and murder. I am more entertained than ever before!

[b_funky]

each update to this wonderful story is more compelling than the last
u should be proud that u have this amazing ability with words

Greatest Ever

[anonymous]

This has to be the best story I have ever read so far... and it's not even finished. I cannot wait for the book to come out so I can pleasure myself while reading it. Zach has to be my favorite person in the world right now.

[molo17]

just wondering does this story have any coherent chronological order?
i think i know the answer

great story tho, as good as the others and those to come