A Love Story

[captainswank]

Title: A Love Story
Author: captainswank
Pairing: wincest
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~1,200
Summary: An experiment in Creepy. Dean comes back from hell a demon, and Sam needs that blood.
Warnings: Bloodplay, blood drinking, cut flesh, gore, death, incest.

Comments

[badbastion]

HHhhhnnnnnnggggggh. This is so slick and messy and yeah, visceral. Love the bloodplay, love how hungry they both are for it. The moment when they meet and recognize each other for what they are, and we see how far down the path Sam has gone is kind of like a sweet punch in the gut. And your words! fool’s gold smile for Sammy. a silence Dean has to smash. how he carved a world with flame and hunger and now it’s just for them. dip his tongue into the slit he’s made in Dean, lapping him up. Oh man, that is sex right there. I could keep quoting things at you, but just know that I love your writing voice.

Oh wait. The ending, gdi. That last sentence is incredible.

This is hot and terrible and so meaty, and I love it. I'm glad you're writing more >:D

[captainswank]

Dude I think your comment is hotter than the fic, whew!

but BB this is the greatest comment I could ever receive I want to come over there and just SMOOCH YOUR FACE UGH :') :') :')

as I writhe on the ground in paroxysms of happiness

oh man I was going for a sucker punch with the sam powers thing and I didn't think it worked all that well but I am glad that it did work ahh

THEY ARE HOT AND TERRIBLE AND MEATY MEN

I AM GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT

CRIES

tries to write more

oh also yeah like just stylistically I'm trying to reach a balance between unique weirdness and readability

like I want rhetorical flourishes but I don't want to draw the reader out of the atmosphere of the narrative by calling attention to the construction of the text

hOW TO WRITE????? tell me ;_;

[sammichgirl]

Hey, you found your way back from schmoop! And, WELLL DONE!

This was fantasticly gory and rich with images. Creepy and man, still just very them. Just Sam'nDean, together. That last line was brilliant.

[captainswank]

I COULDN'T HAVE DONE IT WITHOUT YOUR MORAL SUPPORT! :'D

Yeah, actually a series of images sort of popped into my mind and I just wrote them out. (Which I guess is why it's so disjointed...) I'm so glad even though they're totally off the deep end it still feels like them! :D Thank you!

[ext_1575762]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh this is utter perfection ;A; the combined lust for blood and brothers is pretty much exactly what I needed c:<

But I do have to say, as much as I love the pure evil, I kinda wanted to cry when I read the bit about Bobby. As far as I'm concerned, in this world of brothers gone evil and lusting for death, destruction, and dick, I prefer to pretend that there is no such thing as Bobby, as he was transported to a world where he has a nice family and always has a cold beer or some whiskey in hand. But that's just 'cause I love Bobby almost as much as I love dat wincest (which is, admittedly, a lot).

But yeah. Just my opinion obviously. Amazing though hnnng etc~~~ ^____^b

[captainswank]

Ahh, thank you so much!!

Haha, awww!!! I love your Bobby feels~ I mean I knew the boys wouldn't hurt him (physically) no matter what, so at least his body's safe (can't say the same about his mind... ;_;) Yeah, I needed someone who had known them forever and who could step in at the end there and juxtapose what they were in the sweetness of their childhood to the nobility of their hunting to the total monsters they became. Bobby was the man for the job but he did get hurt along the way, eh? Civilian casualty! ;_;

ALSO CAN I CHANGE THE SUMMARY OF THE FIC TO "A WORLD OF BROTHERS GONE EVIL AND LUSTING FOR DEATH, DESTRUCTION, AND DICK" BECAUSE THAT'S MORE PERFECT THAN I CAN SAY. :')

[narcisisticniny]

It was so creepy but so good. :D

[captainswank]

Ahh, thank you!! My goals were reached~ :3