this is a stupid sotry i wrote. tell me how bad it is!!

[captwertzy]

The images flashed through my head. The day we met,getting his phone number, call him, our first kiss, and even the first time we had sex. I still felt the wonderful feelings I felt since day one. I lost everything in one moment. It all ended over some hot girl in her 20's with a rgeat career and direction. We said we'd still be friends but I knew

Comments

[obscure_kyoko]

Like I said earlier, you should write more often.

[katerina87]

Duh, it's good! YOU wrote it! =-P You're very good with this kinda stuff, so definitely stick with it! And is this personal experience? I'm guessing so. =-P

[luvduf06]

if you want to see bad...how about looking at stuff i write..haha...well the answer is i never write so u wouldn't see it posted anywhere...but i think your writing is really good!!!