Stamina 6

Jul 08, 2010 02:01

Stamina
Chapter 6- Detained
Callie/Arizona
NC-17
Standard Disclaimer: Don't own, Don't profit
Sequel to "Closer to Desperation" and several others, all located at my journal. This portion is set six months after the end of "Closer to Desperation"

A/N: This one is super duper short and I'm not a huge fan of it. Not even gonna lie, I got a little in ( Read more... )

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simplyaddie July 8 2010, 18:55:59 UTC
The last paragraph especially was just so sad and so beautifully written! The entire chapter was heart breaking. I loved it. ;) I can't wait to see how you take things next chapter. You are an amazing writer and I feel very privileged to be reading this even if it wasn't a chapter you were extremely proud of. I truly found it to be more than worth while reading and commenting. I found it to be necessary because whether or not you like some of your updates they are always soo wonderful to read. ♥

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walking_weapon July 8 2010, 19:04:42 UTC
this was good. I really hope you keep it up because I love your writing :)

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seethejoy July 10 2010, 01:20:35 UTC
I missed this story! I have to say I did a little `wtf` when it went disaster-fic but you`re doing a good job of it so far, so I`m still planning to follow as long as you feel like writing :)

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kel_085 July 11 2010, 11:56:11 UTC
I've really missed this story, this chapter was so sad, that last paragraph got me. :( Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

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sgafirenity July 12 2010, 00:36:07 UTC
Oh my god, this is not going to be good when Callie finds out her mother has died. Very sad indeed. It was sad enough in this chapter, I can't imagine what the next oen is going to be like.

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