There's a couple of things I did not remember from when I first read the story... Not sure if you added them later, or if they just slipped my attention: "I do not know," he said sharply. "But all I can think to do is to remain... on the threshold, I suppose. and As her brother did, when he went about his work in the Bag End gardens. --------------- He must be well where he is now - oh, he must be, when he so longed - Ohhhh? :'( "It is too full," she whispered, "too alive." Cool... He *has* permission to cross over the threshold to seek a love, 'it only takes a leap of faith'... ;) All these wise and mighty folk that didn’t think to help when Mr. Frodo were ill and confused. :DDDDDD (always loved that line
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Hey, I'm amazed by the precision of your memory! :) You're right that I changed both lines, though the latter is an old change I made after first posting the story to my LJ, while the former is a recent one.
And thanks for the recommendation. Unfortunately, there seems to be a problem with the link or the html file: when I open the page, it only shows the Tolkien quotes at the top and a single line of text below, but after that it breaks off. Do you know if it has been posted anywhere else?
Oh and there is *another* fic I so wanted you to read, but I'm too asleep now to find it. Work? yes, mine is demanding right now, but I'm glad these talks make me feel so inspired! *falls onto pillow* *snores*
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"I do not know," he said sharply. "But all I can think to do is to remain... on the threshold, I suppose.
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As her brother did, when he went about his work in the Bag End gardens.
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He must be well where he is now - oh, he must be, when he so longed - Ohhhh? :'(
"It is too full," she whispered, "too alive." Cool... He *has* permission to cross over the threshold to seek a love, 'it only takes a leap of faith'... ;)
All these wise and mighty folk that didn’t think to help when Mr. Frodo were ill and confused. :DDDDDD (always loved that line ( ... )
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And thanks for the recommendation. Unfortunately, there seems to be a problem with the link or the html file: when I open the page, it only shows the Tolkien quotes at the top and a single line of text below, but after that it breaks off. Do you know if it has been posted anywhere else?
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*falls onto pillow* *snores*
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