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caramelsilver December 4 2015, 22:00:52 UTC
Narnia, Edmund, control

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autumnia December 5 2015, 01:00:29 UTC
The two young combatants circled each other, eyes alert for any sudden movement from the other and oblivious to the crowd that gathered to watch. Peter struck out first but Edmund anticipated his brother's impatience and with a quick step managed to cause him to lie flat on his back in the middle of the courtyard, the tip of Edmund's sword hovering dangerously close to the High King's heart.

"That was a bit too close for my tastes, Edmund," said Peter, panting with exhaustion as his brother removed the weapon and offered a hand to help him up, "but now I see why the General said learning restraint on a battlefield is important."

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silvr_dagger December 5 2015, 02:11:40 UTC
Nice!

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edenfalling December 5 2015, 04:04:22 UTC
Go Edmund!

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caramelsilver December 5 2015, 13:27:21 UTC
Really good! Thank you! Love me some Pevensie brothers!

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autumnia December 5 2015, 13:50:49 UTC
You're welcome! And thank YOU for hosting this every year. :-)

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lizzie_marie_23 December 25 2015, 01:40:47 UTC
breathe in - dignity; breathe out - intention
Every move Edmund makes is measured and precise, nothing is wasted and nothing is for show. Later he can be smug in the recounting, but he’s made blunders before while in the thick of it, and he’s determined that it will not happen again.

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edenfalling January 13 2016, 06:31:21 UTC
I like how you show his concentration!

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