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Oct 08, 2006 13:44

i would like to not spend my whole time on lj always complaining ( Read more... )

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clama_ne_cesses October 9 2006, 15:18:05 UTC
Nice! I like the idea and I like the way you outlined your rationale (concise but effective). One very small thing though (not sure if you're looking for proofreading or just conceptual help, but this is a proofreading thing): "I am placing myself in the role of the salesperson; however, instead of selling makeup, I am giving away free samples of kisses." (just put a semicolon instead of the first comma).
Sorry you're stressed. *hugs*

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