Nice! I like the idea and I like the way you outlined your rationale (concise but effective). One very small thing though (not sure if you're looking for proofreading or just conceptual help, but this is a proofreading thing): "I am placing myself in the role of the salesperson; however, instead of selling makeup, I am giving away free samples of kisses." (just put a semicolon instead of the first comma). Sorry you're stressed. *hugs*
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Sorry you're stressed. *hugs*
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