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If I Only Had the Heart

Jan 06, 2009 20:17

Title: If I Only Had the Heart [Chapter 3]
Author: carcrashheart_8
Pairings: RyoDa [with more pairings to come]
Rating: R [language, violence, sex]
Summary: Ryo, the class bully, falls in love with the shy transfer student, Ueda. The problem is that Ueda doesn’t say a word and Ryo can’t ever get him to speak. Ryo does all he can to help the boy he ( Read more... )

fanfiction makes fandom a lot more fun, maru can beatbox better than you, ryoda is snarky love, yamapi is synonymous to m00bs, jin is a stupid shit, toma is my japanese baby daddy, koki is gangsta yo, iriguchi deguchi taguchi desu, ryo is 4 feet of snark, ueda is nothing but lips, kame is a try-hard

Comments 76

rekkoi January 7 2009, 04:43:59 UTC

OOOOOOH, THE ENDING OF THIS ONE. I can't wait to see what happens next! Poor Ueda! I love how protective Ryo is over him in this one! :D

carcrashheart_8 January 8 2009, 21:28:40 UTC

Thanks hon! ^^ I'll update soon lol

I ♥ protective Ryo :3

aloja January 7 2009, 04:57:16 UTC

This just keeps getting more exciting and I love this. An overprotective Ryo is love, and hopefully he'll be able to catch onto things pretty soon. Poor Ueda, getting beaten up and when Maru showed up, was it him?
I'm really, really looking forward to the next chapter!!

carcrashheart_8 January 8 2009, 21:30:00 UTC

I'm glad you think it's exciting ^^ I agree! Ryo being overprotective is pure love! XD

I'll be sure to update soon and thanks so much for reading and commenting ♥

messyboo January 7 2009, 05:08:55 UTC

owh...poor ueda...
hmm...maru seems suspicious.
wonder if koki really done it...
well, i'll be waiting for the next one then...

carcrashheart_8 January 8 2009, 21:31:08 UTC

I'll be sure to update soon ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting :D

allboutp January 7 2009, 05:41:08 UTC

i was soooo excited reading this chap when i saw u posted it! *hugs*
srsly, this is sooo much fun! with ryo n his gangs went to look out for infors bout ueda~
n damn was dat nakamaru? how dare he....i'll just wait ryo beat him up into pulp!
hehehehe i shall wait for next!

carcrashheart_8 January 8 2009, 21:32:13 UTC

*hugs* Lol ^^ I'm glad you find it fun :D it's fun writing this as well lol

I'll update soon and thanks for reading and commenting ♥

kitsunemd January 7 2009, 05:41:45 UTC

Just read all three chapters in one sitting and it's really nice...

But... please don't tell me Maru is the bad guy here? *ships maruda* D:

But I really like the story. Looking forward to the next chapter ^^

Peace! ^____^v

carcrashheart_8 January 8 2009, 21:38:00 UTC

I'll be sure to update soon so you can find out for sure :D

Thanks for reading and commenting ^^