Death Note drabble: Sealed in Closure

Aug 28, 2006 13:12

Hmm, more Death Note. I find... That if there's one series I can never write crack of, it's got to be this one.

Title: Sealed in Closure
Series: Death Note
Warning(s): Spoiler for volume 7+ and slight...necrophilic!Light x L
Summary: Light lingers behind...

SEALED IN CLOSURE )

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brauchen_dich August 28 2006, 19:57:48 UTC
That was so eerie... Very nice. It's funny--I can almost see that happening after L's death.

^^ I hope you write more Death Note! X3 That would be splendid!

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card_mistress August 28 2006, 23:12:09 UTC
Thanks for commenting :3 Who knows, maybe it did happen... Fufufu.

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brauchen_dich August 29 2006, 00:07:17 UTC
X3 No problem! Thanks for writing!

... Maybe? :P Hehe--yeah, totally happened. ^^

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slvrsolealchmst August 29 2006, 00:53:54 UTC
Oh, whew. See, the problem with my brain is that I think the dirtiest thing possible, and so for a second I swore to god that Light was going to like... begin screwing L's dead body or something terrifying and twisted like that. (But if it DID happen I probably would have burst out laughing or something.) Maybe it was the "and slight...necrophilic" bit that threw me. See, you say, "slight" and it's like us dirty minded people don't even hear you. xP

Anyway, great story. I like the bit about how L tasted like death. Seems like something Light would definitely observe at that point. Nicely done!

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card_mistress August 29 2006, 01:04:46 UTC
Someone should sooo write that.

Light penetrates into L, screws him for an hour or so. He decides he's completely exhausted... then... notices that L's body have begun rigiding and realizes that it's physically impossible remove himself. So now L's anal muscles are clamping down on Light and his father comes back... and he's got some very creative explaining to do. :D How's that for crack?

Thanks, by the way. ^_~

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slvrsolealchmst August 29 2006, 19:51:10 UTC
I hope you know that just had my rolling on the floor. My sides hurt.

Good grief, someone HAS to write it. You came up with the details, so you should! (But was it you who said you could never write crack for this series? I forget.) If you don't, maybe I will when I have some spare time. I've never written crack before though, and I'm afraid I might ruin it... xP Also, I don't think I'm clever enough to make it short and witty.

But now that I've insulted myself I really wanna try writing it!

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card_mistress August 30 2006, 20:51:50 UTC
Write it :D Oh my gosh, you should totally write it.
I bet it's going to freak at least half the people who wander in and held pure and innocent intentions. >D

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vietoftheusa August 29 2006, 02:34:21 UTC
That's so disturbing in a wonderfully Raito way. X3 Too bad rigor mortis didn't set in soon enough for that scene about Raito getting stuck to happen. XD

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card_mistress August 29 2006, 03:44:31 UTC
Ooh, but in a fangirl's sick sick imagination... Anything's possible x3

I really waiting for someone to write it. It'd be such an awesomely twisted joke. :D

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vietoftheusa August 29 2006, 04:06:22 UTC
Kinda creepy once you really think about it seriously. Dang, now I'm staring at my L avvie. XD

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card_mistress August 29 2006, 06:12:42 UTC
Ooh... Innocent little L... Wait until you see what we have in stored for you... *Creepy smile*

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errantimpulses August 29 2006, 04:38:59 UTC
Hahah, mentioning Necrophilia and LightxL does kind of give the spoiler away in the warning, neh?

otherwise, very sweet. Well. :-/ Considering....

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card_mistress August 29 2006, 05:13:17 UTC
*Cough* No one needs to know that :)

Thanks for the feedback. And yes... Considering... [inserts wild imagination].

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aburah October 26 2006, 21:29:51 UTC
oh my god...
this was the best "short story" i've ever read.
and it relly fits to raito.

raito you nekrophilic bastard <3;

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card_mistress November 3 2006, 16:47:19 UTC
Light's taking advantage of poor L~ But thanks :) And that avatar is so adorable!

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