The Spectator (one-shot)

[cardi_gan]

                Ueda Tatsuya was an observer. He always had been. As a child, instead of playing with the other children on his street, he would sit on a nearby wall and watch as little boys played cowboys and Indians, chased the little girls and accused them of having ‘girl bugs’. It never occurred to Tatsuya that he could join in; after all he

Comments

[deeya_ohmiya]

This is lovely and well-written (^_^)..
Hope you will write more (^_^)..
Thanks soo much for sharing (^_^)..

[cardi_gan]

Thank you! :3 I'm so happy that you think so! ♥
Because of all the lovely comments, I'm sure to write more (Y)
Thank you for commenting and reading my story :)

[holly_berri]

so sweet!! *flails* love how you described and developed the characters and of course ryo and tat-chan are so adorable in this~ <333

thanks so much sharing!!

[cardi_gan]

Thank youu :3 I'm glad that you think so <3 since I'm a new fan it's good that I've described the characters well :)
Thank you for commenting and reading my story ♥

[agnes_yunita]

Ueda finally can be released from his dull life...just being together with ryochan..
it's wonderfull
Thank u^^

[cardi_gan]

thank you so much ♥ I'm so happy that you think so :)
Ueda's life is so dull without his Ryo haha
♥

[meikoxlove]

A really awesome fic! I can't possibly describe in words how much I love the way you wrote it. The character development is really great and the flow of the story is just perfect! *___* I wish I could write like that... *envious* And the story itself is so beautiful! ♥

I hope to read more from you in the future. ^___^

[cardi_gan]

Thank you for the awesome reply <3 when I write something I am always worried that it doesn't flow, so it means a lot that you think it does ♥
Thank you for the support and thanks to your amazing comments I'm sure to write more :3 ♥

[slipknot240]

<3 amazing fic!!! i love it!!

[cardi_gan]

Thank you so much! ♥ this makes me very happy :3