Well, I decided to post a fic here - it is about when Faith is first called as a slayer. The first part is pretty crappy, but I would love review on it. So please, any feedback would be great.
Nice writing. You really get into the emotions. A couple of sentences confused me and I couldn't tell what you were trying to say, A right hook to the jaw. Her father had down that when she had stolen a pack of his cigarettes, and now this son of a bitch was feeling it.
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Never read a story about Faith's beginnings before. Don't see a lot of those out there. Really, excellent job! :)
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Nice writing. You really get into the emotions. A couple of sentences confused me and I couldn't tell what you were trying to say, A right hook to the jaw. Her father had down that when she had stolen a pack of his cigarettes, and now this son of a bitch was feeling it.
I like it though. Good work!
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