Chapter 1: Desperate Times

[caribbeanorchid]

The first chapter of The Caribbean Orchid. Please comment!

“Cold and foggy when it happened. Late it was, too, ‘f I remember aright. The holds were fair burstin’ with Spanish gold from the five ships we’d taken at sea. Aye, and the captain was in a particular foul mood that night. Too long at sea, some said. I say his sword be itchin’ at his hip

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[caribbeanorchid]

All I've got for chapter 4 is "The rest of the crossing to England, Norrington's interactions with Cate were decidedly more friendly."

So glad you're watching this spot, "Meredith"!

[whisper_lillies]

Inspiring... I'm tempted to do some FF now... I usually just rp. I like this a lot, and Catherine doesn't seem to be very much like Mary-Sue, which is refreshing. Hopfully she can stay this way! I'll continue reading so long as you continue posting.

xo,
Charli*Ann

[cassiopaya]

Nice work! I like "Cobbie" already.

[vintage__cherry]

Wow! you're good.
James is so cold in this chapter he's no longer the english gentleman and jilted suitor he's now the hardened sailor and slightly frosty captain; a great use of characterization.

Captain Norrington sighed heavily and took his pistol from his belt, clubbing the sailor over the head. *snort* mental images rock my socks :)

“Ye’d shoot yer own captain?”...
“Ye were never my captain, Flynn,”

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[anonymous]

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