Chapter 4: Admiration

[caribbeanorchid]

The storm rose about them, whipping the sea spray like needles into their faces. Norrington had seen the gale coming, and had prepared the ship for the worst. Yet it seemed, as Fletcher swore, the wind was blowing them back the way they had come. Captain Norrington was determined to at least hold what waters he had already come through, if he could

Comments

[classics_lover]

You took your time with that chapter! It was worth the wait, though.
I like that James' defeats made their marks on him but left him stronger for them, unlike the man in so many emo fics there are out there.

Lovely.

[meletor_et_al]

short, but sweet, in every way :) I love your description of the storm in the first line, whipping the sea spray like needles, and the moment James takes to listen to his ship. Jamie and the sea is my very favorite relationship, so the attention you paid it here toward the end of the chapter is just heartbreaking.

[cassiopaya]

Hooray! I've been waiting a long time for Chapter 4!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story

[caldwellfan]

I really like this Norrington. I hope you write more and soon!