(I feel like I've watched someone grow up with this story, having seen both drafts. XD)
Oh, this is lovely, though. Bits and pieces of it continue to make my heart sad - the explosion that killed the Prewetts and Dearborn, the way Sirius notices how Tonks looks at Remus, the way Remus finally admits what he's been doing and the way James and Lily tear Sirius away and into the veil and then that damn RAT - and it reminds me of why I like your writing so much in the first place. These little moments stick with you, even after the story's over.
So yes. Sorry I didn't comment during the games themselves, but wonderful job. <3
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(I feel like I've watched someone grow up with this story, having seen both drafts. XD)
Oh, this is lovely, though. Bits and pieces of it continue to make my heart sad - the explosion that killed the Prewetts and Dearborn, the way Sirius notices how Tonks looks at Remus, the way Remus finally admits what he's been doing and the way James and Lily tear Sirius away and into the veil and then that damn RAT - and it reminds me of why I like your writing so much in the first place. These little moments stick with you, even after the story's over.
So yes. Sorry I didn't comment during the games themselves, but wonderful job. <3
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asdjhfdbh that reminds me I need to go read yours too. I'm off to do that!
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