[Fanfic] "First times" to last a lifetime

[carmenw84]

Title: "First times" to last a lifetime
Author: Me (Carmen)
Length: One-shot (3,559)
Genre: Highschool AU, romance, fluff, tiiiiiiiiiiiiiny angst, smut
Rating: NC-17 
Disclaimer: I own only the plot.~
Pairings: Ohmiya
Summary: Nino's on a mission to find love, but he ends up with Ohno instead.
Notes: This is for youdont_54y ! Happy belated birthday! ♥ I hope you like

Comments

[himitsu_17]

Smexy ;)

I liked the beginning~
The middle part was pretty angsty :o
Poor Toma XDXD And Sakurai-sensei XP

Thanks for writing and sharing ;D

[carmenw84]

Yay! I tried by bestest at the the smut, not really good. T^T
And really? o: I thought it was pretty tiny LOL. Maybe it's cause I write hardcore angst sometimes and this just seemed little to me...
I had to add Sho-chan somewhere and Toma just ended up there. xD
Thanks for reading! ^^

[mielove]

WoW !!
I totally love it XD
this was so cute but hot
thanks for sharing

[carmenw84]

Yay! I'm glad you do!
Thanks for reading. ^^

[lumi_no_heya]

I loved it!
Specially the smut part *q*
Thank you for sharing =)

[carmenw84]

Wow, really? o:
I'm not very good at writing smut, lol.
Thanks for reading.~

[yohana_lestari]

uwah i love it XD its great :)

[carmenw84]

Yay! Thanks for reading. ^^

[zero_shichi]

late comment, but i just have to let you know that i totally enjoyed this one. loved it. ;)<3 i hope you write more of this. ;)

[carmenw84]

Yay! I'm glad you totally enjoyed it, hehe. ^^
Thanks for reading. <3