I accidentally a vid

Jul 12, 2013 22:26


Okay, so some of you might have noticed that I haven't really come off a fannish high since The Avengers came out?

I might have done a thing for a blogger I like. (Hint: it looks great at 720p or better) Also: warnings for references to suicide and implied child abuse.

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/am currently sitting here going "oh god did I really post that ( Read more... )

carmen makes fanvids

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niyalune August 26 2013, 13:08:05 UTC
It did turn out pretty nice, yes :) ! I love how you used both movies and managed to keep only Ruffalo, it's very well done :D

Now on the feedback part - take it with a grain of salt, you're the vidder and you do what you want ;D :
- in some places you don't really follow the music; for example at 0:19, when the music changes, it would be a good spot to change to the next clip. But you did that pretty well around 0:43.
- the music is also important in relation to clip length : at 3:05 the clip last almost 4 seconds and doesn't move much but it's perfectly fine because the music is calming down, but right before at 3:00 you have a similar clip (long/doesn't move much) but it doesn't fit as well because the music is more action-y, if that makes sense.
- your fading-to-black transitions sometimes last a bit long imo (at 2:51 for example, it lasts almost a second). It threw me off a bit.

Anyway, don't let my nitpicking bring you down - you did a great job !

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carmenwoods August 26 2013, 14:19:25 UTC
:D I really am pleased with my Ruff!editing. And thank you so much for your comments and feedback! This is exactly the kind of thing I need to hear. :D

-Some of the clip length issues (and that early timing issue) stemmed from me not really having anything else that seemed like it would fit in a particular spot, but I'll definitely see what I can do about that for next time.

-Doh, my transitions. I felt like a lot of my clips, especially where I was trying to keep up with the lyrics, went by really fast. It made me worried that it was too 'busy', so I was trying to give the viewer a break with longer transitions in other places. And then in other places I just didn't have anything else I thought I could fit there, so I tried to take up time with longer transitions. Thank you for telling me they threw you! DX I'll have to try to find out what 'typical' transition speeds tend to be, then.

Thank you again for taking the time to leave me a comment! ^^

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lilly_the_kid August 29 2013, 14:55:03 UTC
Wow, this is really great! I only saw Avengers, but I enjoyed this vid very much. I agree with the other commenter that the black frames are a bit too long, maybe it would be even more effective to leave them out completely since they kinda stopped the flow for me. (This is just my personal response and I tend to love fast paced vids/fast cutting, so that's where I'm coming from :) )

Anyway, other than that I love the energy and how the narrative unfolds. It's a totally awesome vid!

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carmenwoods August 29 2013, 18:24:08 UTC
Thank you so much for telling me you liked it!! ^^

And thank you too for pointing out that all the empty parts interrupted the vid for you. Doh! I definitely have a lot to try and pay attention to when I make another vid. XD

I very much appreciate your feedback. Thank you!~

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