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mulder200 October 6 2010, 21:54:24 UTC
The image of Cas and Sam as silent, invisible stalkers is both sad and sweet. And so was their plan. Dean's right. They should have just talked to him.

Still, I love how they all reunited. That was sweet.

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carmexgirl October 7 2010, 19:06:44 UTC
Yes, they should have really talked to Dean rather than formulate their convoluted plans. They had to reunite in the end though--I couldn't have ended on an angsty note!

Thanks for reading!

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inagaddadavita October 7 2010, 00:01:28 UTC
Well...I thoroughly enjoyed that. Loved all the cracky little touches like the vegetarian chupacabra, the almost sam-cas kiss, sam taking the hellhounds for walkies, etc,etc... all left me laughing out loud XD

I really liked that sam used legal knowledge to keep hell in check and that he was converting it to an annoying rather than evil place... and that cas' heaven looked like a motel room.

Plus a well thought out plot, plenty of cas sam and ultimately dean friendship... and thank you for getting them all together in the end with a happy ending no less. All in all this fic put me in a very happy mood. Thanks ^_^

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carmexgirl October 7 2010, 19:11:15 UTC
Thanks--I tried to put in a lot of humour, so I'm glad that came through. I'm so pleased you liked the plot and that it all made sense - I sweated over that bit because I always knew where I wanted to go and kind of how I wanted to get there, but it's the little bits that can throw you, you know?

Sam's Hell would be a total legal mindfield. He's actually an evil genius :D

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anirasjourn October 7 2010, 02:32:20 UTC
holy shit, this was really good. It was funny and sweet and I Love it.Mem'd. Sam should totally rule hell.

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carmexgirl October 7 2010, 19:15:19 UTC
Heh, thanks, I'm really pleased you enjoyed it!

I agree, Sam would kick ass down there. There'd be forms for everything, so much so they wouldn't have time to do anything actually evil because they'd have to fill in millions of forms to do it.

Thanks so much for reading, and thanks for the mem!

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carmexgirl October 7 2010, 19:20:00 UTC
Thanks! I studied law at Uni, so I really enjoyed writing all of the legal mumbo jumbo. I can just imagine the two of them thinking up ways to make it difficult for anyone to cause any kind of trouble.

Glad you enjoyed it :D

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dossier October 8 2010, 19:40:37 UTC
Sam and Cas are totally Laurel & Hardy; magnificent plans that are completely whacked. Hilarious!

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carmexgirl October 10 2010, 19:29:13 UTC
Thanks--glad you liked it!

They are totally Laurel and Hardy, silly boys :D

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