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Fic: Hit the Ground Upright 2/?

Feb 02, 2011 19:42

Title: Hit the Ground Upright 2/?
Author: carmexgirl
Pairing: Dean/Castiel,
Rating: NC-17 overall. This part PG-13
Warnings: Some violence.
Spoilers: None
Word Count: this chapter 3,897, 7443 so far
Notes: Hooker!AU. Castiel's stuck in a crappy, pressurized job where he's unappreciated. He employs the services hooker to let off steam. Unlike the rest of ( Read more... )

dean/castiel, supernatural, rated nc-17, rated pg-13

Comments 26

takhallus February 2 2011, 20:26:20 UTC

Oh Cas, I love your car crash life!

Loving this, I was very excited when I saw the update

carmexgirl February 2 2011, 22:40:28 UTC

I know, he just seems to veer from one disaster to the next! And maybe more...

So glad you're liking this!

apolla_92 February 2 2011, 20:50:28 UTC

OMG! Yes, you updated! That was a great chapter! Castiel rescuing Dean, lolz awwww I'm loving this! Post more ASAP!

carmexgirl February 2 2011, 22:44:05 UTC

Well, Cas needed to do something to get himself into Dean's good books. I guess stopping him from being beaten to a pulp counts.

Don't worry, I have more planned :D

siennis February 2 2011, 20:58:35 UTC

Oh my gosh!! Oh my gosh, oh my gosh!

So glad Castiel felt guilty for being such an ass, I just wanted to whack him with a wooden spoon (my Grandma's favourite lol).

Can't wait for more!

carmexgirl February 2 2011, 22:46:41 UTC

Yes, me too! He was such an idiot, but at least he tried to make amends and flet guilty for being such an asshole.

So pleased you liked this--there will be more, I promise!

mulder200 February 2 2011, 21:16:44 UTC

“My name is Castiel. It’s not a made up name, it’s a real name, I swear. Please, we need to get out of here,” he motions to the guy on the floor who’s slowly coming round. “Please get in the car.”

Dean complies, running to the passenger side. Castiel’s shaking so hard he can barely get the car out of park, and his foot trembles on the accelerator. Eventually he gets it together, speeding off before the guy gets a good look at his car.

“Thanks, man,” Dean says from the passenger side of the car, holding his nose in an attempt to stop it bleeding. “But I gotta ask: What the hell is this?”

LOL! Well, Castiel did want to make amends although I don't think this is quite what he had in mind.

carmexgirl February 2 2011, 22:52:46 UTC

Definitely not! But then, I think Cas' life has been so mapped out for him, it might do him good to have something unpredictable happen...

e0wyn February 2 2011, 22:27:10 UTC

An update, yes!!! I was really looking forward to this and now I'm even more curious to see where this story is headed :D

It’s the stress of the job, he reasons, the fact that he’s got all of this extra work piled on top of him, no support, and not that many friends to sound off to. He has to find other outlets-it’s either that or jump off the nearest bridge

Poor Castiel :( I really like how you described in more depth his situation in the beginning of the chapter, so we could understand a little better where all that anger was coming from.

carmexgirl February 2 2011, 22:58:07 UTC

Thanks! I wanted to get across more some of the reasons why Castiel was acting like such an ass in the last chapter. He's got quite a bit to be angry about... Let's hope he gets something good out of this latest situation :)

Glad you're liking it so far!