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This Doesn't Need To Get Complicated: Chapter One

Sep 29, 2010 01:04

Title: This Doesn't Need to Get Complicated

Fandom/Pairing: Glee - Puck and Rachel

Summary/Prompt: Rachel asks Puck to be her donor. Puck agrees as long as they do it the old fashioned way

Rating/Word Count: T/2,233 words

A/N: It was originally a prompt on the puckrachel drabble meme, but I'm slowly trying to turn into a multi-chap fic

( Rachel’s smooth, petite hand slid into Puck’s larger calloused one as they exited the bar into the night. It’s just Noah, Rachel breathed to herself as she glanced quickly up at him again. There’s absolutely nothing to be nervous about. )

character: noah puckerman, ship: puck/rachel, "this doesn't need to get complicated", character: rachel berry, tv show: glee, prompt: puckleberry drabble meme

Comments 17

pegm81484 September 30 2010, 00:32:34 UTC

This was awesome. I really love the idea behind this story, it's totally different from everything else I've read in this fandom. Keep up the great work!

carnivaldreams September 30 2010, 07:10:08 UTC

Thank you!
I really try to stick to ideas that are original, so it's great that you're enjoying it so far.

bubbles91083 September 30 2010, 06:42:16 UTC

Oh I am loving this. A Puckleberry baby makes me smile. And I adore that Santana is in this. I love PezBerry friendship. I can't wait to see how this story is going to unfold. But beyond that I just wanted to say that you're a very talented writer. =)

carnivaldreams September 30 2010, 07:11:22 UTC

Pucklberry babies make me smile as well =)
And the PezBerry friendship is my favorite.

I still blush when people compliment my writing, it means so much to me. Thank you =)

reejewel89 October 22 2010, 08:21:02 UTC

Oh Gosh! This is a lovely start! I can't wait to read more. Are you planning on posting more soon? I sure hope so!

Hugs and kisses

Ree

maggiequeen4 November 13 2010, 02:25:38 UTC

Loving this! Need more now ;)