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Aug 17, 2015 00:11

Hello, I am definitely still alive AND I have fanfic ( Read more... )

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merryb87 August 17 2015, 22:01:12 UTC
I feel slightly bad for commenting so late on this, especially since you went out of your way to tell me that you written it and where you were going to post it. Goes to show how much I actually check lj.

I've always been a fan of your work, especially Remus and Tonks because you have a way of capturing the two and finding perfect moments for them to be them. Even if one of them is being a bit of an idiot. Regardless another great little piece from you and being inspired by music seems to have given this a tone that really works well, like you can almost hear the music playing faintly in the background or something.

Keep writing you do have a talent for it.

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carnivalgirl August 22 2015, 07:54:51 UTC
Thank you! I'm sorry, I didn't want to make you feel like you had an obligation to read it immediately. I was just feeling pumped to have written it.

I'm glad you like my R/T fabric. I've probably written something for every stage of their relationship that I've imagined, but I hadn't, up til now, gone into the actual biography. So I was really glad to do that.

I'm glad you liked the music side of it too, it has been an idea in my head for a long time.

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mollywheezy August 18 2015, 12:05:32 UTC
Great to hear from you! And I love your story. Such beautiful descriptions! I'm looking forward to more . . . ;)

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carnivalgirl August 22 2015, 07:57:16 UTC
Thank you! I'm really happy you liked the descriptions, I struggle with that a bit. I will try and post something more in the future. :)

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shimotsuki August 19 2015, 02:32:44 UTC
So nice to see a post from you!

And this is beautiful. I love the way it feels suspended in time while Tonks is thinking about what she's done -- I was holding my breath, waiting for Remus's reaction just as Tonks must have been. I also like the way she thinks about feeling the night, using her senses to feel where Remus is just as she does when she's on Auror duty. And this may be my favorite part of all: I think, not for the first time, that I love the whole of him, not just the idea I have him, not just the side of himself that he shows me

Her love is just so palpable here. Beautifully done.

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carnivalgirl August 22 2015, 08:04:48 UTC
Thank you so much! I really liked the moment as soon as I read it in the biography. How it must have felt for Tonks to just snap that she loved him. So I am glad I could pull off a decent fanfic about it. :)

And speaking of which, I am really glad you like that line. Now that I'm Tonks's age myself I compare myself with her, and I wonder if she spent a lot of time thinking about what kind of person Remus was, what history he had, what she might understand about him and what not. But loving him passionately with that.

Thanks again. :)

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carnivalgirl August 22 2015, 15:35:47 UTC
Thank you so much! I really liked the moment as soon as I read it in the biography. How it must have felt for Tonks to just snap that she loved him. So I am glad I could pull off a decent fanfic about it. :)

And speaking of which, I am really glad you like that line. Now that I'm Tonks's age myself I compare myself with her, and I wonder if she spent a lot of time thinking about what kind of person Remus was, what history he had, what she might understand about him and what not. But loving him passionately with that.

Thanks again. :)

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gilpin25 August 20 2015, 21:56:57 UTC
Great to hear from you - and to read this. Being in Tonks's head works so well here: I love the descriptions of the night, how she's feeling, and how Remus responds in turn. My favourite part is the explanation of Something in the Air, but the whole piece is lovely.

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carnivalgirl August 24 2015, 21:33:05 UTC
It's great to hear from you too! I need to get back on track with writing, I really appreciate the encouragement.

I love the whole idea of atmosphere and tension as a thing and there must have been atmosphere in spades between R/T in those early days. :)

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sspring92 August 22 2015, 04:26:24 UTC
Yay! Things on my flist! HP Things! RT things! So glad to see you back and thank you so much for posting. I get to missing the good ol days of lj!

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