FIC - There's A Calm Surrender (2/5) -- Nuke BigBang 2012

[carolinablu85]

Title: There's a Calm Surrender
Author: carolinablu85
Artist: frances_veritas ( HERE OMG)
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: I disclaim.
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Warnings: Characters deaths, Deviation from canon (story starts with canon from summer 2009), Angst, Multiple Flashbacks
Summary: When his dad is killed and he thinks it’s his fault, Luke runs away from his home and his family- and Noah.

Comments

[babslovesmusic]

“We’re brothers again?” * Shit,I think there's something in my eye.

“Don’t worry, he doesn’t grow on you.” LOL LOL

I love not knowing what the hell is going on with Damian.

[carolinablu85]

Why do you think I put little kids in the story? To play with emotions!

And yay for the Damian thing- originally you would have found out in this chapter everything he was doing, but I changed it to later for the draaaaaama ;)

Thanks!

[asonearth]

wow this story is so, so good.. i'm not sure though to call it a love story, about two lost souls, or a crime story because of one evil guy who hold a hole twon in his hands.. evil, very evil ;)anyway you have some great ways here to wave this two kinda nets together and the questions i have only get more...lol still love the effect my lovely two boys have on eachother no matter how long they were apart!! great writing and a great plot here.. thank you very much for participating and sharing here<3 Annette

[carolinablu85]

All of the above! :D Thank you so so much!

[seajellybaby]

Gosh the tissues keep flying with this one! What are you trying to do to me woman! URG! By the way... love the homage to Lion King...

So much for Luke to catch up on... Damian has really sunk his teeth in! I wonder if Noah works for him more to keep his eye on the man than anything else.

The scene with Reid... can I say perfection? ;-) I enjoyed so much how Reid tries to bait Noah and how Noah (much to Reid's annoyance/fasination) remains his stoic self!

[carolinablu85]

Like many many people say, the show missed on a great opportunity to pair Reid and Noah together as 'friends' or something like friends. They had a really great dynamic in their scenes. I liked the idea that only a calm person would be able to rile Reid up ;)

Thanks!!

[wheelie47]

Such an excellent chapter. Things are really becoming intense. Love this story you're building and how you're slowly giving us clues that everything is not as it seems. Damian seems to be behind a plot to take Holden's place in the family and has holds over everyone.

Poor Noah having to go through being beholden to Damian and having to deal with Lily taking her grief out on him.

You've got me hooked!

[carolinablu85]

I loved the idea of Noah being trapped- whether he knows it or not- by Damian. Originally Damian was going to be much more sneakily manipulative and be really power-hungry over Noah, but I toned it down a lot. Poor boy's got enough to deal with!

Thank you!

[neddiheht]

I feel like you've reached down my throat and turned me inside out. The characters are all... and the AH! I'm so confused!

[carolinablu85]

Ha, sorry! But thank you! Hopefully things will get better and make sense for you soon! :)