Comments | carolinecrane: Fic: All the Way To Paris 16/29 (CSI, Nick/Greg, NC17)

carolinecrane

Fic: All the Way To Paris 16/29 (CSI, Nick/Greg, NC17)

Dec 18, 2003 14:40

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fic: csi, csi, series: paris, fic

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carolinecrane December 18 2003, 14:57:40 UTC

Thanks. The next parts will be like pulling teeth and I'm sure I'll be whining any day now that I should have given in to the brief, overwhelming urge to kill them both in a car crash on the way to the airport. But then the fic would have been much, much shorter.

mindyfromohio December 18 2003, 16:44:20 UTC

It made him feel like a kid on prom night, trying to convince his date's parents that they weren't really doing anything wrong.

Hee! No matter how old you get, you're still a teenager in your parents' eyes, aren't you?

And no matter how good the sex was, Greg is now going to overanalyze this, isn't he?

carolinecrane December 18 2003, 17:21:50 UTC

God, you really never do get over that feeling. At least I haven't, and Nick's only a year older than me.

Of course Greg is going to overanalyze. That's why I'm avoiding him, he's terribly dreary when he's trying to talk himself out of something.

ruggerdavey December 18 2003, 19:02:41 UTC

"And just so you know, I didn't have to tell Grissom where I was going."

Eep! *freaks out* More, more! How does Greg react? Ack!

And, really, this is the most awesome fic ever.

carolinecrane December 18 2003, 21:17:12 UTC

Sorry. I might get the next part written tomorrow, if I can get Speed to stop confusing me long enough to let Greg take a shot.

ruggerdavey December 19 2003, 00:39:11 UTC

Well, if you take a pause for Speed/Tyler, I wouldn't be totally mad. Because Speed deserves some (non-Greg) lovin'.

octopussy December 18 2003, 20:35:07 UTC

God, I adore canon Nick for his overall personality and especially all the subtleties that you're treated to as the series progresses.

That last line is awesome. I'll bet everyone says so, but. It's true. It invokes all the love for Nick that the actual TV show does. This might just be my favorite chapter after the phone conversation where Greg gives in. :)

carolinecrane December 18 2003, 21:17:59 UTC

Thanks. I wasn't sure whether or not to put that last line out there, but now I'm glad I did.

octopussy December 18 2003, 21:21:10 UTC

I guess it's true then that some of the greatest artistic successes are borne of the greatest risks. *tries the charming Nick smile*

Yes! An insecure Nick! chyldofeternity December 18 2003, 21:14:33 UTC

"He wanted...everything -- more time, a sign that this thing between them was going somewhere, some kind of assurance that Greg felt the same thing he was feeling."

OMG! I just love this fic! Its amazing and its so adorable because its all angsty (yes i know that's the point >.<). Its not too often that there is a good angsty fic out there I enjoy and can get through. *swoons* Just such a great pairing.

Love your writing!!

Re: Yes! An insecure Nick! carolinecrane December 18 2003, 21:18:53 UTC

Thanks. It's kind of Angst Lite, because I can't bear to make them suffer too much. Glad you're enjoying, and I'm glad you got the icon thing figured out : )

Re: Yes! An insecure Nick! chyldofeternity December 18 2003, 21:26:31 UTC

Yeah. You've been a great help ^_^ I'm thinkin bout getting the paid account soon, just cause it'll be more fun. More stuff for me to tinker with and all o.o like that's what I need in my life...more things that take up time. Oh well. What can ya do? ^_^

Oh. I'm all for the lite Angst btw. >.> too much suffering and my mind takes a sabbatical and makes up its own happy endings.