Comments | carolinecrane: Fic: At the Hour Of Death 9/15 (CSI, Nick/Greg, NC17)

carolinecrane

Fic: At the Hour Of Death 9/15 (CSI, Nick/Greg, NC17)

Apr 04, 2004 14:37

Utility chapters are the bane of my existence. But I'm closer to finished than I was before, and that's always a good thing.

( In which Nick doesn't want to believe what the evidence is telling him. )

fic: csi, series: hour of death, csi, fic

Comments 21

sillie82 April 4 2004, 16:55:00 UTC

This is good... *nods* And Greg's not gonna be happy when he finds out Nick did the interview without him...

I really like the way you're building it up... *sits and waits for the next part* :P

carolinecrane April 4 2004, 17:33:03 UTC

Thanks, glad you're enjoying : )

rainydaypsycho April 4 2004, 22:03:53 UTC

Aw, I don't know who to feel sorrier for, Brett or Nick. Of course I should go with Nick, because Brett might be the guilty one, and he just plays innocent well, and Nick's gonna get his ass handed to him by Greg.

carolinecrane April 4 2004, 23:25:52 UTC

Here's me, hoping the ass-handing scene isn't a big, fat let-down. But yeah, Nick's still an idiot. I love him so.

stareyednight April 4 2004, 23:52:36 UTC

Yipeee! Just got back from my computer exile and I find lovely new chapters. I'm so loving Nick. You write him better than anyone else; you understand him and let him be Nick, damaged psyche and all, while unfolding these amazing stories around him.

carolinecrane April 5 2004, 14:40:32 UTC

His damaged psyche is the most attractive thing about him. Or maybe that's just me ; ) Thanks.

kbfan April 5 2004, 15:28:46 UTC

I love this. The casefic part of the story doesn't overshadow the relationship type concept of the rest of the story. It's like a supporting character that gives the characters reasons for doing things and saying things...it's bloody brilliant.

I really love this and can't wait to see what Greg has to say, about the new information -- much less about being left out of the interview...

carolinecrane April 5 2004, 16:58:47 UTC

Thanks, I'm so glad the case isn't totally intrusive. I'm trying to keep it as balanced as possible, but I think I'm starting to confuse myself. Thank God for outlines.