Fic: At the Hour of Death 10/15 (CSI, Nick/Greg, NC17)

[carolinecrane]

I cannot sleep. This is bad because I have to be up in...five and a half hours. But since I'm up anyway and I had this part mostly written, I'm making good use of my insomnia by posting another part of the case fic. I could be coding the icon section I said I was going to add to the Nick/Greg archive this weekend, but I'm not. I'll get to it

Comments

[rainydaypsycho]

Response1: Kiss him, Nick! Never mind that he's angry with you, and that he'd probably shove you away and you'd never see him again because he'd transfer to Miami, and have a hot torrid affair with whoever's down there.(Is that Speed/Tyler's domain?)(Which shortens to S/T D, and I'll stop because I'm tired.)
Response2: That's right, Greg, chew him out!

...And then there's the softer side of me that wants to pet them both, and throw them in a small confined area that may or may not be used to hold coats until they finally have sex. Geez, I've gotta start actually watching this show. I don't even know what they sound like.

[carolinecrane]

Which shortens to S/T D, and I'll stop because I'm tired

Hee. That's hilarious. And yes, that's Speed/Tyler domain. I have actually written a little Speed/Greg snippet, but I feel really guilty about it now.

The coat closet idea is really not a bad one. Would that there was a coat closet at the crime lab ; )

[stareyednight]

Killing me. You're killing me here.

For the record, I'm almost as excited about the case as I am about the impending kissage(There's going to be kissage, right? Right?).

[carolinecrane]

Can I plead the fifth? No, seriously, I'm killing *me* here, so if it makes you feel any better, I'm suffering right along with you. Writing preslash is painful, even though I sort of enjoy torturing Nick.

[whimsicalnotion]

I'm sorry I haven't fed you back on all the chapters so far, it's mostly been a greedy read and a lack of time thing. And that's a terrible excuse because if you're anything like me you're a feedback whore you like to get the feedback.

But? OMG!

This is like the best foreplay I've ever come across. I swear I'll pop when they actually ... I don't know, not even kiss, maybe acknowledge something.

It's a damn fine story and I feel like you're giving me what I need and not what I want, and considering I'm really bad at delayed gratification and I'm loving the pace of this; I salute you!

I don't know who to hug first to help to dispel the tension, in a strictly platonic sense of course. In a less than innocent endeavour, I would love to rumple the hell out of your Greg.

[carolinecrane]

Don't worry about feedback. With chapter fic (especially at the speed at which I write) I don't expect it. Not to mention these are short chapters. I'm really glad you're still reading and enjoying, though, thanks for letting me know.

[wirrrn]

Hey,

Bittersweet romantic pathos! Loved it!

-I'm also going through a bit on an insomniac patch at the moment; I just lie there hour after hour waiting to drop off- much like Ronald Reagan on the toilet, I'd imagine ... Still, I've been using the lack-of-down-time to finally get within finishing distance on my JEEPERS CREEPERS 2 fic!

great story!

Gav!

[carolinecrane]

Glad to hear your story's moving along. I'm hoping my insomnia is a one-time thing, because I'm old and need my beauty sleep ; )

[wirrrn]

Hey,

I'm hoping my insomnia is a one-time thing, because I'm old and need my beauty sleep ; )

-Well, at least we get some great Caroline-fic because of it!

Gav!

btw- I'm still not sleeping. That's 5 days now. I'm not too worried though, beacuse I've never been a big fan of sleep anyway. And at least this way Freddy has to go someplace else for victims....

[sillie82]

Heh... sleep is for the weak... ^_~

Anyway... great chapter. Nick should have know Greg would be angry... Heh, I'm curious how Nick's gonna make it up to him... :P

[carolinecrane]

Heh... sleep is for the weak...

Spoken like a person who is a lot younger than me ; )

[sillie82]

Heh... I don't know how old you are, so I wouldn't know... :P