Comments | carolinecrane: Fic: Fringe (Brotherhood III, Megan/Victoria, PG)

carolinecrane

Fic: Fringe (Brotherhood III, Megan/Victoria, PG)

Aug 13, 2004 21:18

Title: Fringe
Fandom: Brotherhood III: Young Demons
Pairing: Megan/Victoria preslash, mentions of Lex/Roger
Rating: PG
Summary: Lex has Roger, and Victoria wants something all her own. She's just not sure what.
Author's Note: Follows Like That. Apparently Victoria is a little bitter toward Lex and Roger. I feel kind of bad about that, because I ( Read more... )

fic: brotherhood iii, fic, series: megan, brotherhood

Comments 8

exitsign August 13 2004, 20:34:41 UTC

Eep. You're going to kill me with the sweet way before they ever even start dating, aren't you? Why do I not mind at all?

So so sweet. With the rescuing and the hair tucking and the touching and the invitations and just... all of it? Yes. All of it. So all of it. I love how you write Victoria's POV, she's still so tough and kind of bitchy but she's got this warmness and this sweetness and this 'I don't really care but, you know, I do... sort of' caring that just makes it almost impossible for me to wait for them to get together. Because I want to see exactly what she'll be like when she's got someone who wants her and likes her and... ::girlie sigh::

Yeah, I've got it so bad. Two stories and I'm already caving, damn you. Damn you, woman, you are evil. Write more before I die. omgguhdeadexclamationpoint

carolinecrane August 14 2004, 07:25:30 UTC

I promise not to kill you. Well, I'll try, because I want my Harlan/Marcus fic. Unless the whole 'two Marcuses' thing is a problem. Because I just thought of that, and I totally know how it goes. Every time I go back to Forsaken fic I get confused about Nick.

Um. Where was I? Oh, right. Femmeslash. I'm very glad you're enjoying these two, because what with the no-actual-scenes-together-except-where-Victoria's-possessed, it was a bit of a risk. And, um, I might have written the first paragraph of that Andy/Stef fic already. Even though I still haven't rewatched the movie so I don't know about characterization yet. But it's started, that's something.

exitsign August 14 2004, 14:04:21 UTC

wnuionwuionxiownxio!!1!! Andy/Stef! ::twirls you:: I'm sososo fucking excited! Eeeeeee! IloveyouIloveyouIloveyou!

Ahem. Right. um. Ignore that.

No, no, the Marcus thing is fine. I'm a fandom whore so it's definitely not the first time I've ever had to wrap my brain around it. Plus, you know, their entire names could be the same and I would still be able to tell them apart. Because yours is cute and kind of murderous and mine just looks like Jaime Yeates. And? As soon as I stop cackling about that I'm going to go watch Brotherhood II and try to overcome my fear flesh out the idea I have.

Just because they don't have really good scenes together doesn't mean shit, you've totally got them IC and you're writing a fucking perfect storyline here. Totally. You have nothing to worry about ever.

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carolinecrane August 14 2004, 07:27:02 UTC

I'm SO in love with Lex/Roger, so I don't blame you one bit. I had this whole argument with Victoria while I was writing this, and of course she won because she was right, but it pained me to blame them for anything. Because it's just teen angst, it's nobody's fault. Angst happens.

The next part...well, I hope I can pull it off the way I want. We'll see. But yes, very infatuated with these two right now, so I'm really glad you like them.

rainydaypsycho August 13 2004, 21:35:54 UTC

Aww. Victoria is Megan's own knight in shining armor. And wouldn't that be a fun Friday session?

carolinecrane August 14 2004, 07:27:20 UTC

Oh God. That would be hilarious, if I thought I could write their little games.

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rainydaypsycho August 13 2004, 23:40:45 UTC

I'm debating(to myself, natch) on whether Lex told Vic to get Roger, but not to tell anyone that he wanted him, so when it was mentioned, he immediately denied it, because Roger? In "The Game"? Yeah, that wouldn't do.

On the other hand, when I first watched it all the way through, I thought that Vic(who wanted Roger) told Stan that Lex wanted Roger in the game so that Stan would actually talk to Roger with her, so they could bait him, as opposed to Vic just going up and talking to Roger all by her onesies.

carolinecrane August 14 2004, 07:36:57 UTC

I promise there won't be too much makeup talk. Mainly because I am not that adept at such things, and therefore would probably get something wrong. But I'm still hoping a little for the hot and sweet, so we'll see. I think mostly they were giving me problems because I was trying to start in the wrong place, and they weren't ready to dive right into the porn. They were right, as it turns out, because for as self-confident as Victoria likes to think she is, she really doesn't know what she's getting herself into ( ... )