I like the external POV when it comes to writing Creegan because half the fun of the guy is the way people react to him. I also like how unbalanced you write Creegan/Rivers in terms of level of interest. The delivery of that in this story is quite subtle.
Rivers is grinning like a kid with a crush and Creegan's smirking right back at him
Just a smirk in answer. It reminds me of the first fic you wrote about them. That one was fun. I love the possibility in that sort of inequality. The way a person can fool themselves into believing a relationship to be more than it is. Poor Rivers.
That's exactly the thing I find so interesting about Creegan as well, that weird gravitational pull he has that drags other people into his universe. Sometimes I think he knows the affect he has on the people around him, other times not so much. But I'm glad that came across here, third party POV isn't my usualy style so I wasn't sure. Thanks.
Oh Jesus, that was so good. I've been wondering, in my own screwed up little TE fantasy world, how Branca would react to the Creegan/Rivers relationship and actually, that comes close to it. This whole cast has so many issues between them and it just makes it so sad. Especially Branca with losing her fiance, this just makes her feel, if not jealous, left out.
The POV change was nice because it's difficult to get into Creegan's head and then again, I wouldn't want to know exactly what's going on in there.
I love how you write Rivers, the blushing? Ha! I love him so this was just amazing even with the overall tone.
But seriously? You rock so much for writing this. <3
*happysigh* I so absolutely adore this - seeing relationship from other's POV is one of my fic kink and I loved what you did with Swopes' POV in other fic, and having seen Creegan and Rivers in Branca's eyes... this is just perfect.
It's as if I'm actually watching the show - no, I'm really seeing it, the scene plays itself before my eyes. OSC building, late at night, office in dim light. Branca, her blond hair dully shining, so lonely but can't admit it to herself to save her life, trying so hard to keep herself in check while the ones she thought she had got each other. Oh I so clearly see her doing it! And Creegan's clueless touches - or should I say Creegan is clueless, or maybe it's just he doesn't care at all. And oh Rivers... the blushing and everything. *flails*
You write good, and you write these three so achingly good, you make my heart throb and my head spin with delight. I fully, totally agree with what nekosmuse said: in your hands, they can only be better. Bliss.
I'm just so glad you'd written for this fandom. Thank you.
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Rivers is grinning like a kid with a crush and Creegan's smirking right back at him
Just a smirk in answer. It reminds me of the first fic you wrote about them. That one was fun. I love the possibility in that sort of inequality. The way a person can fool themselves into believing a relationship to be more than it is. Poor Rivers.
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The POV change was nice because it's difficult to get into Creegan's head and then again, I wouldn't want to know exactly what's going on in there.
I love how you write Rivers, the blushing? Ha! I love him so this was just amazing even with the overall tone.
But seriously? You rock so much for writing this. <3
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It's as if I'm actually watching the show - no, I'm really seeing it, the scene plays itself before my eyes. OSC building, late at night, office in dim light. Branca, her blond hair dully shining, so lonely but can't admit it to herself to save her life, trying so hard to keep herself in check while the ones she thought she had got each other. Oh I so clearly see her doing it! And Creegan's clueless touches - or should I say Creegan is clueless, or maybe it's just he doesn't care at all. And oh Rivers... the blushing and everything. *flails*
You write good, and you write these three so achingly good, you make my heart throb and my head spin with delight. I fully, totally agree with what nekosmuse said: in your hands, they can only be better. Bliss.
I'm just so glad you'd written for this fandom. Thank you.
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