Comments | carolinecrane: Fic: Butterfly Effect 33/? (BWOC, Tommy/Merton, NC17)

carolinecrane

Fic: Butterfly Effect 33/? (BWOC, Tommy/Merton, NC17)

May 27, 2007 09:14

Yeah. So I wrote something. I have lost the ability to judge the quality of my own writing, however, and I really have no idea if I'm still on track toward the ever-changing ending or what. But hey, I wrote something, and that's one more chapter toward putting this bad boy to bed ( Read more... )

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minotaurs May 27 2007, 17:04:43 UTC

I still haven't read any of these (be strong, self!), but I love watching the numbers go up, and I'm really glad you're still working on it. I know it'll be worth all the time and effort you're putting into it.

carolinecrane May 28 2007, 01:44:01 UTC

Honestly, I'm not sure you're missing anything. Then again, I have been at this fic for so long that I've pretty much lost any sense of perspective. But it'll be finished eventually, because I'm just that stubborn.

writingpathways May 27 2007, 17:30:23 UTC

The tips of Merton's ears turned pink as he finally pushed himself off the door, and Tommy's heart did another weird little flip at the sight. He wanted to touch Merton's ears and see if they were as warm as they looked, wanted to trace them with his tongue and it was a good thing Merton was already grabbing his stuff and heading for the showers, or Tommy might never let him leave their room again.

Eeee! Aww the boys are so cute, and so screwed without any privacy whatsoever!

Loving this as always. And up at the top, I think it's like the first paragraph there is a missing T on the word 'about'.

carolinecrane May 28 2007, 01:45:20 UTC

I know, I feel really sorry for them. Thanks for catching my typo; I did actually read through it, but the keyboard on my laptop kind of bites so I miss letters...well, kind of a lot, actually.

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carolinecrane May 28 2007, 01:52:14 UTC

Thanks again. And if you're struck by inspiration re: cheesy chapter titles, I am always open to suggestion : )

csi_sanders1129 May 27 2007, 21:42:05 UTC

OMG. You updated it! -YAY!!! And I should probably stop yelling and squeeing cause my voice is hoarse enough... xD

You know a fic is awesome when youre still reading 33 chapters in and theres only been a few kisses. Youre an awesome writer, one fo teh best.

PLease updaye again soon!

carolinecrane May 28 2007, 01:53:30 UTC

Thanks, that is a very nice compliment. And yeah, it is really gratifying that people are still reading this after three years, I think? Oh, God.

Anyway, thanks!

sarahtales May 27 2007, 22:48:15 UTC

Yay MAKEOUT CHAPTER. Um, what? I'm clearly secretly twelve.

Lovely, and my heart breaks for Tommy wondering if Merton isn't into it, oh my God.

carolinecrane May 28 2007, 02:00:20 UTC

There really should have been more making out, considering I made everyone wait 33 chapters. It was supposed to be longer, but Tommy wasn't having it. He defied me completely.