Fic: Redemption & Reconstruction (16/?) (DG/Cain UST) (PG-13)

[caroly_214]

Title: Redemption & Reconstruction (16/?)
Author: caroly_214
Characters/Pairings: Pretty much everybody, DG/Cain UST (eventual overt DG/Cain)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4,350
Disclaimer: I may share the same name as someone on the show, but that still doesn’t mean I own anything (shame, that). Telly Northway is the joint property of myself and queenof1000days. Kenley

Comments

[mhairiclaire]

*jaw drops* Can I just say wow.

I only stumbled across this a couple of hours ago but I'm now offically hooked. Can't wait for the next part.

[queenof1000days]

Oh, Jeb, you silly little thing. And Telly!

I suppose this means I need to go over my edits for MM, doesn't it?

How much awesome is this story made of? A bunch, I'll tell you. The ending was sweet and we needed a moment of the BDH.

Eagerly looking forward to Chapter 17.

[elliejgirl]

Yay! I'm glad you made Vy-Sor a spy. I felt like he was more than just an evil longcoat. Lovely chapter, as always.

[ex_nadeshiko480]

YAY for updates!

Oooh! Nice to see DG using her gift to help her parents, no matter how small the task is. I also liked the bit about Vy Sor. Very nice touch.

Loved the banter between DG and Cain. It's so cute!

It's good to finally see Jeb with the big chip off his shoulder and getting along with everyone else. Things just go more swimminigly when that happens.

Hopefully the Royal Army will have luck overthrowing the Longcoats in Central City.

Can't wait for the next bit!

[goodisrelative]

I do love this. DG teasing Cain. Jeb.
War.
A perfect balance of the seriousness of war and the levity of some fun like the Teasing.

I like Jeb too... it's not all perfect, but it is getting better.